Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“typing so much words”应为“typing so many words”，且句子结构较为复杂，建议简化句子并注意语法准确性。

例: Not really. I find writing a bit tiring because it requires typing many words and choosing the best ones carefully. Although writing helps express myself clearly, I prefer speaking or making videos since they are more convenient and engaging for me.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但部分表达不够地道，如“gained much more pleasure”应改为“enjoyed it more”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

例: I enjoy writing short stories because they are captivating and a great way to express my creativity. For example, when I was younger, I used to write about my daily life in short stories. I enjoyed sharing them with my friends because their laughter made me very happy.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“it's a thing I write Highly depends”不通顺，且表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Definitely yes. What I write highly depends on the situation. For example, during exams, I have to write formal academic essays to get good grades. However, in my free time, I prefer writing short stories because they allow me to express myself more creatively and freely.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“when I'm writing my hand”应为“when I'm writing by hand”，且最后一句不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性。

例: I prefer handwriting because it is more visible, which helps me see what I have written and organize my thoughts better. Also, when I write by hand, I can focus more and remember what I wrote. Besides, I feel proud when I look at my handwritten work.

× Not really, I find the writing a bit tiring for me since it requires typing so much words and carefully find the best words you should use.

✓ Not really, I find writing a bit tiring for me since it requires typing so many words and carefully finding the best words you should use.

这里“so much words”中的“words”是可数名词，应该用“so many words”。另外，“carefully find”应改为“carefully finding”，保持动名词形式与前文“typing”一致。

× Not really, I find the writing a bit tiring for me since it requires typing so much words and carefully find the best words you should use.

✓ Not really, I find writing a bit tiring for me since it requires typing so many words and carefully finding the best words you should use.

动词“requires”后面应接动名词形式，因此“carefully find”应改为“carefully finding”。

× I prefer handwriting because it's more visible, allowing me to see what I have written and organized my thoughts better.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it's more visible, allowing me to see what I have written and organize my thoughts better.

“organized”应为动词原形“organize”，因为这里是并列动词结构，且与前面的“see”保持一致。

× Besides, it's so proud to see what I have written on my.

✓ Besides, I'm so proud to see what I have written on my paper.

原句缺少主语，且“on my”不完整，应补充完整名词“paper”，并将“it's so proud”改为“I'm so proud”，使句子结构完整且语义正确。