Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Yes, definitely. For example, I always write a journal after a day. Because it gives me. A private space to write whatever I want. And it helps me. Keep my thoughts organized.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I like to write something that are important or interesting to me because it helps me to remember and organize myself my thoughts better. Besides, I also like to look back at my. Past experiences.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, I think the things I write would change when I get older because my experiences, views and horizons will change. Besides, with the development of technology. The way I write may might also change.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
Actually, I prefer typing, especially for some long and formal documents. Because. It is easy to edit. And more efficient. Ya. Which means I can type more words. In the same time. Then handwriting.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答时句子较为零散，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子并用连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免句子过短。
例: Yes, definitely. For example, I always write a journal at the end of the day because it gives me a private space to express my thoughts freely, and it helps me keep my ideas organized.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，同时使用连接词使内容更连贯。
例: I like to write about things that are important or interesting to me because it helps me remember and organize my thoughts better. Besides, I also enjoy looking back at my past experiences.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误（may might），建议注意语法准确性，并用连接词增强句子连贯性。
例: Yes, I think the things I write will change as I get older because my experiences, views, and horizons will evolve. Moreover, with the development of technology, the way I write might also change.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答句子断断续续，缺乏连贯性，且有口语化词汇“Ya”，建议使用完整句子，避免口语词汇，并用连接词使表达更流畅。
例: Actually, I prefer typing, especially for long and formal documents, because it is easier to edit and more efficient. This means I can type more words in the same amount of time compared to handwriting.
文法
× I like to write something that are important or interesting to me because it helps me to remember and organize myself my thoughts better.
✓ I like to write things that are important or interesting to me because it helps me to remember and organize my thoughts better.
这里'something'是不可数或单数形式，但后面用了复数动词'are'，应改为复数名词'things'以匹配复数动词。
× I like to write something that are important or interesting to me because it helps me to remember and organize myself my thoughts better.
✓ I like to write things that are important or interesting to me because it helps me to remember and organize my thoughts better.
'organize myself my thoughts'中'myself'使用错误，应去掉，正确表达为'organize my thoughts'。
× Besides, with the development of technology. The way I write may might also change.
✓ Besides, with the development of technology, the way I write may also change.
'may might'两个情态动词连用不正确，应只用一个情态动词'may'。
× Ya. Which means I can type more words. In the same time. Then handwriting.
✓ Yeah, which means I can type more words in the same time than handwriting.
'in the same time'应为'in the same time'或更常用的'at the same time'，且比较时应使用'than'而非'then'。这里建议改为'at the same time'和'than'。
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