Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: No, I don't write much these days. At school, I usually use my tablet to type assignments or take exams, so handwriting has become quite rare in my daily life.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题，建议注意动词搭配和句子连贯性，同时丰富细节使内容更具体。

例: If I have to write, I prefer recording unforgettable experiences because it helps me remember them more clearly. Also, I can easily share these memories with my family and friends.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但语法和表达有待改进。建议注意主谓一致和用词准确，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, definitely. What I write changes as I grow older because my opinions and experiences evolve. Moreover, the way I write has changed; now I mostly use digital devices instead of pen and paper.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子，注意句子结构和词汇使用，确保表达准确且连贯。

例: I prefer typing because it's very convenient and makes it easy to check my work. Also, I can upload and share my writing with friends and family anytime and anywhere.

提案: 回答内容与问题不符，且表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，说明写日记的频率，并用具体细节支持回答。

例: I don't keep a diary regularly, but sometimes I type short notes about my day on my phone to remember important events.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，建议注意动词选择和句子结构，同时丰富细节使表达更具体自然。

例: Sometimes, I share interesting experiences on social media platforms like TikTok and Redbook. Many followers enjoy my posts, and it's a great way for me to document and share my daily life.

× So if I must to write, I will choose to record that unforgettable experience because it can make my memory become more clearly and additionally, if I need, I can share to my family members and friends very easily.

✓ So if I must write, I will choose to record that unforgettable experience because it can make my memory become clearer and additionally, if I need, I can share it with my family members and friends very easily.

“must to write”中的“to”是不正确的，情态动词后面应直接接动词原形，故应为“must write”。“more clearly”应改为比较级“clearer”，因为这里是比较记忆的清晰度。动词“share”后应加宾语“it”，并且介词应为“with”，表示分享给某人。

× Writing has become very rare in nowadays school life.

✓ Writing has become very rare in nowadays' school life.

“nowadays”作为副词不应直接修饰名词，需用所有格形式“nowadays'”来修饰“school life”，表示“现在的学校生活”。

× I sometime choose to allocate a fascinating experience to some social media platforms like TikTok and Redbook.

✓ I sometimes choose to upload a fascinating experience to some social media platforms like TikTok and Redbook.

“sometime”应为副词“sometimes”，表示“有时”。“allocate”用法不当，正确表达上传内容应使用“upload”。

× I can share to my family members and friends very easily.

✓ I can share with my family members and friends very easily.

动词“share”后应使用介词“with”表示分享给某人，而不是“to”。

× The things that I write will change as I get older.

✓ The things that I write will change as I get older.

此句无单复数错误，保持原句。

× What's more, the way for me to write have changed directly.

✓ What's more, the way for me to write has changed directly.

主语“the way”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。

× Also it can make it can if I need.

✓ Also it can do so if I need.

原句结构混乱，缺少明确表达。用“do so”替代“make it can”更符合英语表达习惯。

× I can't upload it anywhere at any time and also I can share to my friends and family members as soon as possible.

✓ I can upload it anywhere at any time and also I can share it with my friends and family members as soon as possible.

“can't upload”与上下文不符，应为肯定句“can upload”。“share to”应改为“share with”，并补充宾语“it”。