Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。天気の説明に集中し、余計な情報は避けましょう。また、文法や語彙の誤りを修正し、簡潔に答えることが重要です。

例: It's usually rainy in my hometown, especially during the spring season. Because of this, people often carry umbrellas when they go outside.

提案: 発音や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。正しい単語を使い、文法を整え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I can wear warm clothes to stay comfortable, but hot weather makes me feel very uncomfortable.

提案: 文が不明瞭で、論理的なつながりが弱いです。意見をはっきり述べ、理由を簡潔に説明し、接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

例: I prefer dry weather because it usually feels warmer than it actually is. Also, dry weather is more comfortable for me than wet weather.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、文法ミスや語彙の誤用があります。正しい表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every night before I go to bed. This helps me prepare for the weather and decide what to wear the next day.

提案: 語彙の誤用が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい単語を使い、具体的な影響を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I think climate change is a serious problem. For example, glaciers are melting, and sea levels are rising because of increased greenhouse gas emissions.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、内容が不明瞭です。訪れたい理由を明確にし、具体的な例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to visit Canada to experience the cold weather and see the beautiful snow.

× It's usually rainy days in my hometown, so thanks to its rainy condition, we'll be able to get a discount in the closest supermarket from my home.

✓ It's usually rainy in my hometown, so thanks to its rainy condition, we'll be able to get a discount at the closest supermarket from my home.

The phrase 'rainy days' is plural but used with 'It's' which is singular. Also, 'in the closest supermarket' should be 'at the closest supermarket' because 'at' is the correct preposition for locations like stores.

× It's usually rainy days in my hometown, so thanks to its rainy condition, we'll be able to get a discount in the closest supermarket from my home.

✓ It's usually rainy in my hometown, so thanks to its rainy condition, we'll be able to get a discount at the closest supermarket from my home.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to getting a discount at a place; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location for stores or supermarkets.

× I prefer cut weather rather than hot weather because I can endure the cold condition by wearing a lot of curses, but I cannot live in hot condition. Even took take off the cruises.

✓ I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather because I can endure the cold conditions by wearing a lot of clothes, but I cannot live in hot conditions. I even take off the clothes.

The word 'cut' is a typo and should be 'cold'. 'Curses' is incorrect and should be 'clothes'. 'Condition' should be plural 'conditions' to match the context. 'Took take off the cruises' is incorrect; it should be 'I even take off the clothes' to make sense.

× I prefer driver though because hmm. What's the temperature feels warmer than actual temperature so dry weather feels me more colder condition so I prefer to cold weather so dry weather is good.

✓ I prefer drier weather because the temperature feels warmer than the actual temperature, so dry weather feels colder to me. Therefore, I prefer cold weather, so dry weather is good.

'Driver' should be 'drier' (comparative adjective). 'Feels me more colder condition' is incorrect; it should be 'feels colder to me'. Also, 'prefer to cold weather' should be 'prefer cold weather'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I usually check it before go to the bed every day so to prepare the tamales condition and determine where to what to wear the next day.

✓ I usually check it before going to bed every day to prepare for the weather conditions and decide what to wear the next day.

'Before go to the bed' is incorrect; it should be 'before going to bed'. 'Prepare the tamales condition' is likely a typo for 'prepare for the weather conditions'. 'Determine where to what to wear' is incorrect; it should be 'decide what to wear'.

× There are a lot of security emissions all over the world and due to its emissions, the poorer ISIS are melting and the surface of sea is increasing the level.

✓ There are a lot of greenhouse gas emissions all over the world, and due to these emissions, the polar ice caps are melting and the sea level is rising.

'Security emissions' is incorrect; it should be 'greenhouse gas emissions'. 'Poorer ISIS' is a mishearing or typo for 'polar ice caps'. 'Surface of sea is increasing the level' is incorrect; it should be 'sea level is rising'. Plural and singular forms are corrected accordingly.

× Yes, I want to visit many cities that are different from my cities. For example, if I if I visit the Canada, I can feel the cold temperature and. Perhaps I can see the awards in the areas.

✓ Yes, I want to visit many cities that are different from my city. For example, if I visit Canada, I can feel the cold temperature and perhaps see the auroras in the area.

'Different from my cities' should be 'different from my city' (singular). 'The Canada' is incorrect; 'Canada' does not need 'the'. 'Awards' is likely a mishearing of 'auroras'. 'Areas' should be singular 'area' to match context.