Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh dùng những cụm từ không cần thiết như "for my personal perspective" và nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn về thời tiết để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: The weather in my hometown is generally moderate. We experience about three storms each year, but most of the time, the climate is dry and calm. This kind of weather is perfect for outdoor activities such as playing football.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời rõ ràng và có đưa ra lý do cụ thể, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lặp từ như "cold weather" nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng thì cho chính xác hơn.

例: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable and refreshing. Hot weather often makes me feel tired and sweaty, especially after a long day at work. In contrast, cold weather helps me relax and sleep better, which is very important to me.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng chưa rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như "less thick in the wet weather" và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh câu bị ngắt quãng.

例: I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable and less humid. For example, when it's dry, I can enjoy outdoor activities without worrying about rain or mud. On the other hand, wet weather often brings high humidity, which can be uncomfortable.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như "I usually take check" và câu cuối bị thiếu phần kết thúc. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu chính xác, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu trả lời.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening because it helps me plan my activities for the next day. For instance, if rain is expected, I bring an umbrella or reschedule outdoor plans. I check the forecast about once or twice a week to stay prepared.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "in the rise sea levels", "global warming are persisted", và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu đúng, đồng thời diễn đạt ý rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Climate change has caused several negative effects recently. For example, rising sea levels have led to flooding in many coastal areas, and global warming has resulted in more frequent and intense heatwaves. These changes are happening very quickly.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi lặp từ như "for instance" và từ không chính xác như "slowly place", "refresh refreshing that I ever never" khiến câu khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For example, since I live in a tropical city in Vietnam, experiencing a cold place like New York would be very exciting and refreshing for me.

× Well, for my personal perspective, I think the weather in my hometown is quite moderate.

✓ Well, from my personal perspective, I think the weather in my hometown is quite moderate.

The phrase 'for my personal perspective' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from' to indicate viewpoint or opinion.

× Throughout the years, we usually experience only about 3 storms annually and apart from that, the climate is mostly dry and tranquil.

✓ Over the years, we usually experience only about 3 storms annually and apart from that, the climate is mostly dry and tranquil.

The phrase 'Throughout the years' is less natural here; 'Over the years' is the correct prepositional phrase to express a period of time.

× Therefore, this kind of weather makes it comfortable for outdoor activities like playing football.

✓ Therefore, this kind of weather makes it comfortable to do outdoor activities like playing football.

The phrase 'makes it comfortable for outdoor activities' is awkward; 'makes it comfortable to do outdoor activities' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Well, in my opinion, I will prefer cold weather because I find it much more comfortable and refreshing.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer cold weather because I find it much more comfortable and refreshing.

The modal 'will' is incorrectly used with 'prefer' here; 'prefer' is a stative verb and usually used in present tense to express general preference.

× Besides, hot weather can be quite exhausting and especially after a long day of work as it makes me feel sweaty and tired.

✓ Besides, hot weather can be quite exhausting, especially after a long day of work, as it makes me feel sweaty and tired.

The sentence lacks commas to separate clauses and the conjunction 'and' before 'especially' is unnecessary and incorrect.

× On the other hand, cold weather has been more relaxed and fall asleep more easily, which is very important for me.

✓ On the other hand, cold weather is more relaxing and helps me fall asleep more easily, which is very important for me.

The phrase 'has been more relaxed' is incorrect; 'is more relaxing' correctly describes the effect of cold weather. Also, 'fall asleep' needs a helping verb 'helps me' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, from my personal perspective, I was more passionate about dry weather because it feels more comfortable and less thick in the wet weather.

✓ Well, from my personal perspective, I am more passionate about dry weather because it feels more comfortable and less humid than wet weather.

The use of past tense 'was' is inconsistent with the present feeling; 'am' is correct. Also, 'less thick in the wet weather' is incorrect; 'less humid than wet weather' is the proper comparison.

× For example, when it's dry, I can enjoy activity without worrying about rain or mud.

✓ For example, when it's dry, I can enjoy activities without worrying about rain or mud.

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to match the general meaning.

× Also, wet weather often brings high humidity. We can make earth feel happy and.

✓ Also, wet weather often brings high humidity, which can make the environment uncomfortable.

The sentence 'We can make earth feel happy and.' is incomplete and unclear; it should be corrected to a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Therefore, I usually take check the forecast once or twice time per week to stay prepared for.

✓ Therefore, I usually check the forecast once or twice a week to stay prepared.

The phrase 'take check' is incorrect; 'check' alone is sufficient. Also, 'once or twice time per week' should be 'once or twice a week'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× Well, climate change has caused several adverse effects in recent years.

✓ Well, climate change has caused several adverse effects in recent years.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× For example, in the rise sea levels had led to flooding in many coastal area and global warming are persisted in more frequent and intense heat.

✓ For example, rising sea levels have led to flooding in many coastal areas, and global warming has resulted in more frequent and intense heat.

'Rise sea levels' should be 'rising sea levels'; 'coastal area' should be plural 'coastal areas'; 'global warming are persisted' is incorrect, should be 'global warming has resulted'.

× The chains are happening at very fast way.

✓ These changes are happening very quickly.

'Chains' is incorrect; should be 'changes'. 'At very fast way' is incorrect; correct adverbial phrase is 'very quickly'.

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climates from where I live. For instance, for instance, I live in a tropical city in Vietnam, so if I had a chance to experience seeing a cold or slowly place like that or New York, it would be extremely thrilling and refresh refreshing that I ever never.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities with different climates from where I live. For example, I live in a tropical city in Vietnam, so if I had a chance to experience a cold place like that or New York, it would be extremely thrilling and refreshing.

The phrase 'for instance, for instance' is redundant; 'slowly place' is incorrect, likely meant 'cool place'; 'refresh refreshing that I ever never' is ungrammatical and redundant; corrected to 'refreshing'.