Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。可以用更连贯的句子描述天气和活动。

例: Today, the weather is sunny, which I really enjoy. Because of this, I like to go to the park or garden to exercise and improve my health.

提案: 回答不够完整且表达不清晰。应直接说明偏好并给出具体原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable for me. In hot weather, I don't like going outside much, but in cold weather, I enjoy spending time outdoors.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my clothes dirty, and I have to wash them frequently. Also, dry weather feels cooler and more comfortable.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议用完整句子说明习惯和原因。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it helps me decide what to wear and plan my activities accordingly.

提案: 回答内容不清晰且语法错误严重。应明确表达观点，使用具体例子和正确的句式。

例: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather, such as storms and typhoons, which have had negative effects on the environment and people's lives.

提案: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误。建议用完整句子表达愿望并说明原因。

例: Certainly, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as places that have all four seasons. Since where I live doesn't have winter, I want to experience snow.

× Currently today is a sunny day.

✓ Today is a sunny day.

“Currently”与“today”重复表达时间，且“currently”通常用于进行时态，句中不需要“currently”，简化为“Today is a sunny day.”更自然。

× And then I can go to the park or go to the like garden and stay in the river.

✓ Then I can go to the park or to the garden and stay by the river.

“like garden”表达不清，应去掉“like”，并且“stay in the river”不合适，应该是“stay by the river”（在河边）。

× Exercise, improve my health, yeah.

✓ I exercise to improve my health.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整，应补充完整句子。

× in the hot weather I come to go outside and I like to go to the garden.

✓ In hot weather, I don't like to go outside, but I like to go to the garden.

“come to go”用法错误，应使用正确的情态动词表达意愿或习惯。

× Just as I said, it can make me.

✓ Just as I said, it makes me feel good.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整表达。

× when you wear like AT shirt or jeans, it's always make The Dirty

✓ when you wear a T-shirt or jeans, they always get dirty

“AT shirt”应为“T-shirt”，且“shirt”单数时需加冠词“a”，动词“make”应改为“get”，且“jeans”复数，动词需与复数主语一致。

× Yeah, I have checking the weather forecast every day because I must know today I need to wear what?

✓ Yeah, I check the weather forecast every day because I must know what to wear today.

“have checking”错误，应使用一般现在时“check”，且“know today I need to wear what”语序错误，应调整为“know what to wear today”。

× it it can help me more.

✓ It can help me a lot.

重复“it it”错误，且“more”用法不当，改为“a lot”更自然。

× In recent years, the street weather always out, like storms falling and the typhoon.

✓ In recent years, the weather has often been extreme, with storms and typhoons.

“street weather always out”表达不清，应改为“weather has often been extreme”，且“storms falling”不正确，应直接说“storms”。

× I think it's much better, much, much bad.

✓ I think it's much worse.

“much better”与“much bad”矛盾，且“much bad”错误，应使用“much worse”表示“更糟”。

× Certainly I want to feel about different weathers, like a summer, spring, autumn and winter.

✓ Certainly, I want to experience different weathers, like summer, spring, autumn, and winter.

“weathers”通常不可数，改为“different weather conditions”或直接用“different seasons”，且“a summer”错误，季节前不加冠词。

× And in now I I live there, it doesn't have the winter and I I come to see snow, I.

✓ And now I live there, it doesn't have winter, and I want to see snow.

“in now”错误，应为“now”，“doesn't have the winter”中“the”不需要，且“come to see snow”表达不自然，应改为“want to see snow”。