Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and a bit long. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence about the weather, then explain why you like it with specific details.

例: I live in a place with cold weather, which I enjoy because winter is my favorite season. I especially like it since I can wear formal clothes like jackets and coats comfortably during this time.

提案: Avoid repeating your previous answer directly. Instead, provide a fresh, clear response with specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

例: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to wear formal clothes like jackets and coats comfortably. In contrast, hot weather makes it difficult to dress formally.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically, use correct vocabulary, and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your points.

例: I prefer wet weather over dry weather because dry days make me sweat a lot, which can lead to dehydration. On the other hand, rainy weather is refreshing and allows me to go outside comfortably.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast, especially during the rainy season. Since I work in construction, wet weather often prevents me from starting work, so I need to plan accordingly.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly with specific examples and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: I believe climate change has had significant effects recently, especially in the northern part of my country. For example, floods have become more frequent due to sudden flash floods.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and provide clear reasons with linking words.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from where I live. For instance, I often go to Cox's Bazaar to relax and enjoy the coastal weather, which is very different from the dry climate at my home.

× Actually, I like to live in cold weather because winter season is my favorite season and I love to wear formal dresses like jacket and coat, and winter season is the season that I can wear this kind of.

✓ Actually, I like to live in cold weather because the winter season is my favorite season and I love to wear formal clothes like jackets and coats, and the winter season is the season when I can wear these kinds of clothes.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'winter season' should be preceded by 'the' as it refers to a specific season, 'formal dresses' is better expressed as 'formal clothes' since jackets and coats are types of clothes, and 'jacket and coat' should be pluralized to 'jackets and coats' to match the plural form. Also, 'this kind of' should be 'these kinds of clothes' to agree in number with the plural items.

× As I said before in the question number one, I prefer cold weather. This is due to the fact I love to wear formalities like jacket and coat and cold weather is very perfect to wear this kind.

✓ As I said before in question number one, I prefer cold weather. This is due to the fact I love to wear formal clothes like jackets and coats, and cold weather is perfect for wearing these kinds of clothes.

'Formalities' is incorrect; the correct word is 'formal clothes'. 'Jacket and coat' should be pluralized to 'jackets and coats'. The phrase 'very perfect' is redundant; 'perfect' alone suffices. 'To wear this kind' should be 'for wearing these kinds of clothes' to correctly express the idea and agree in number.

× Actually everyone need that dry or waited there.

✓ Actually, everyone needs dry or wet weather.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'needs' (third person singular). 'Waited' is incorrect; the intended word is 'wet'. The phrase 'that dry or waited there' is unclear and corrected to 'dry or wet weather' for clarity and correctness.

× Actually it is the modest drop dry and wet weather because I am sweating very much in the dry days and there is a possibility of dehydration and the weight weather is the rainy season and we can go anywhere.

✓ Actually, it is the moderate drop in dry and wet weather because I sweat a lot on dry days and there is a possibility of dehydration. The wet weather is the rainy season, and we can go anywhere then.

The phrase 'modest drop dry and wet weather' is unclear; corrected to 'moderate drop in dry and wet weather'. 'Sweating very much' is better expressed as 'I sweat a lot'. 'Weight weather' is a typo for 'wet weather'. The sentence is split for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Yes, I'm in the habit of staying weather forecast, especially in the rainy season because in the rainy season I can't start my work due to the.

✓ Yes, I'm in the habit of checking the weather forecast, especially in the rainy season because during the rainy season I can't start my work due to the weather.

'Staying weather forecast' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'checking the weather forecast'. 'Due to the' is incomplete and needs an object; 'due to the weather' completes the thought. 'In the rainy season' is better expressed as 'during the rainy season' for clarity.

× This is due to the fact that construction work isn't possible in wet weather, so that's why very often I have to check it.

✓ This is due to the fact that construction work isn't possible in wet weather, so that's why I often have to check it.

The phrase 'very often I have to check it' is awkward; 'I often have to check it' is more natural. No past tense correction is needed here, but the sentence is improved for clarity and naturalness.

× I think climate sends the vast effect in our recent year, especially where I work in the area of northern part of our country.

✓ I think climate has had a vast effect in recent years, especially where I work in the northern part of our country.

'Climate sends the vast effect' is incorrect; 'climate has had a vast effect' is correct. 'In our recent year' should be 'in recent years' for natural expression. 'Area of northern part' is redundant; 'northern part' suffices.

× This is the area where flood occur very oftenly as a lack of flash floods.

✓ This is the area where floods occur very often due to a lack of flash floods.

'Flood' should be plural 'floods' to match the context. 'Occur very oftenly' is incorrect; 'very often' is the correct adverbial phrase. 'As a lack of' should be 'due to a lack of' for correct preposition use.

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities and different climates from where I am live.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates from where I live.

'And different climates' should be 'with different climates' to correctly link cities and climates. 'Where I am live' is incorrect; 'where I live' is correct.

× That's why I am frequently go to Cox's Bazaar and for my refreshing, for expanding my leisure time.

✓ That's why I frequently go to Cox's Bazaar for refreshing and to expand my leisure time.

'I am frequently go' is incorrect; it should be 'I frequently go'. 'For my refreshing' is awkward; 'for refreshing' is better. 'For expanding my leisure time' is better expressed as 'to expand my leisure time'.

× Yeah, and where I live that is a dry weather.

✓ Yeah, and where I live, the weather is dry.

'That is a dry weather' is incorrect; 'the weather is dry' is the correct expression. 'Weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.