Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用错误，如“ambien”和“ambulance”应为“umbrella”。句子结构重复，表达不够自然。建议注意单词拼写，避免重复表达，并简洁明了地描述天气情况。

例: The weather where I live is usually rainy, so the ground is often wet. Because of this, I have to carry an umbrella almost every day, which I find quite inconvenient.

提案: 回答表达了观点并尝试对比，但存在拼写错误（如“Cove”应为“warm”或“layers”），且比喻不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和自然的表达方式。

例: I prefer cold weather because it feels more comfortable, and I can easily warm up by wearing layers. On the other hand, hot weather is harder to deal with since it's difficult to cool down quickly.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误（如“VE very”，“ringing”应为“raining”），句子结构较长且不够连贯。建议注意语法和拼写，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sweaty and uncomfortable. Besides, dry weather is ideal for playing sports like football without worrying about rain.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“have the hobby of checking”应为“usually check”，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确时态和表达习惯。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave home to make sure I don't get wet and remember to bring an umbrella.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“factor some the survival”，“modern eyes”用词错误。建议加强语法练习，使用准确词汇表达观点。

例: I believe climate change has caused global temperatures to rise, which threatens the survival of species like polar bears because their habitats are melting, making it harder for them to find food.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复词汇，如“to to”，且“experiment different climate”表达不自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式和正确语法。

例: Yes, definitely. I think visiting cities with different climates is a great opportunity to experience new weather, lifestyles, and learn about different cultures.

× The weather where I live is always raining, so the ground is usually wet, so this kind of weather makes it necessary to bring the ambien almost every day and I really hate that because the ambulance is very heavy.

✓ The weather where I live is always rainy, so the ground is usually wet. This kind of weather makes it necessary to bring an umbrella almost every day, and I really hate that because the umbrella is very heavy.

这里“raining”用作形容天气状态时应使用形容词“rainy”，而不是动词形式。单词“ambien”应为“umbrella”，且“ambulance”是救护车，语义错误。冠词使用不当，应使用不定冠词“an umbrella”。

× I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel comfortable and it is easy to warm up by dressing Cove.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel comfortable and it is easy to warm up by dressing warmly.

“dressing Cove”中的“Cove”是错误的词，应为副词“warmly”修饰动词“dressing”，表示“穿得暖和”。

× In contrast, in hot weather, it is hard to cool down because you cannot just take off your skin or take off your clothes.

✓ In contrast, in hot weather, it is hard to cool down because you cannot just take off your clothes.

“take off your skin”不合逻辑且错误，应删除。

× I prefer dry weather because the wet weather make me feel sweaty which is VE very uncomfortable and beside the dry weather provides an ideal condition for me to play sport which I really enjoy such as playing football without worrying ringing.

✓ I prefer dry weather because the wet weather makes me feel sweaty, which is very uncomfortable. Besides, dry weather provides ideal conditions for me to play sports, which I really enjoy, such as playing football without worrying about raining.

“wet weather make”主谓不一致，应为“makes”。“beside”应为“besides”。“play sport”应为复数“play sports”。“worrying ringing”应为“worrying about raining”。

× Yes, I do have the hobby of checking the weather forecast usually in the morning before I left the because I want to make sure I won't getting wet so it will remind me to bring an umbrella.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast in the morning before I leave because I want to make sure I won't get wet, so it reminds me to bring an umbrella.

“before I left”时态错误，应为一般现在时“before I leave”。“won't getting”应为“won't get”。“do have the hobby of checking”表达不自然，改为“usually check”。

× Well, I strongly believe that the climate change has significantly contributed to the rise in the global temperature, which will factor some the survival of some species such as the polar bears.

✓ Well, I strongly believe that climate change has significantly contributed to the rise in global temperature, which will affect the survival of some species such as polar bears.

“the climate change”中“the”不必要，应去掉。动词“factor”用错，应为“affect”。“some the survival”结构错误，应为“the survival”。

× It is this because the modern eyes make them harder to find food or survive.

✓ It is because of this that modern changes make it harder for them to find food or survive.

句子结构混乱，“It is this because”错误，应改为“It is because of this that”。“modern eyes”应为“modern changes”或“modern climate changes”。“make them harder to find”缺少介词，应为“make it harder for them to find”。

× Yes, definitely. I would say this is an opportunity to make me experiment different climate and different lifestyles and to to learn the culture from there.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would say this is an opportunity for me to experience different climates and different lifestyles and to learn the culture there.

“make me experiment”用法错误，应为“an opportunity for me to experience”。“different climate”应为复数“different climates”。“to to”重复，应删去一个。介词“from”不合适，应为“learn the culture there”。