Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法和拼写错误，如"Nowaday"应为"Nowadays"，并且句子结构可以更自然流畅。可以增加一些具体细节，使回答更丰富。

例: Nowadays, it's summer in Fuzhou, so the weather is usually hot and humid. It often rains in the afternoons, which helps cool things down a bit.

提案: 回答中出现了逻辑混乱，如“hot weather makes me wet and cold”不合常理。建议表达时更准确，避免矛盾，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I don't like extremely hot or cold weather because hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and sweaty, while cold weather forces me to wear heavy clothes to stay warm.

提案: 回答较为自然，但可以用更丰富的词汇和更清晰的逻辑连接词来增强表达效果。

例: I prefer wet weather because although it can be inconvenient at times, dry weather often makes my skin feel dry and uncomfortable.

提案: 表达不够自然，"I have the habits about going out"不符合英语习惯。建议用更地道的表达，并补充具体频率。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going out to see if I need to bring an umbrella.

提案: 语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议学习相关词汇和句型，表达时注意语法和逻辑。

例: The most impressive effect of climate change is global warming. Glaciers at both poles are melting, which causes sea levels to rise and floods some coastal areas.

提案: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，重复词汇。建议用更准确的表达和连贯的句子。

例: Definitely. I want to broaden my horizons by visiting places with different climates, like Iceland, which is always snowy. I've never seen snow before.

× Umm, Nowaday it's summer in Fuzhou, it's quite hot and wet, and it often rains.

✓ Umm, nowadays it's summer in Fuzhou, it's quite hot and wet, and it often rains.

单词拼写错误，“Nowaday”应为“nowadays”，表示现在的情况，属于现在时态的正确使用。

× Neither. I don't like extremely hot and cold weather.

✓ Neither. I don't like extremely hot or cold weather.

“extremely hot and cold weather”表达不准确，应使用“or”连接两个极端，表示不喜欢极端的热或冷天气。

× The hot weather makes me wet and cold.

✓ The hot weather makes me sweaty and uncomfortable.

“wet and cold”与“hot weather”矛盾，热天通常让人出汗，应使用“sweaty and uncomfortable”更准确表达感受。

× Winter makes me feel so cold I need to wear the thick clothes to keep me warm.

✓ Winter makes me feel so cold that I need to wear thick clothes to keep warm.

“the thick clothes”中“the”不合适，且“so cold I need”缺少连词“that”，应改为“so cold that I need to wear thick clothes”。

× OK, for me, I prefer the wet weather.

✓ OK, for me, I prefer wet weather.

“the wet weather”指特定的湿天气，表达一般偏好时不需要定冠词“the”。

× In the wet weather, sometimes it's not convenient, but it's not like the dry weather makes my skin dry and uncomfortable.

✓ In wet weather, sometimes it's not convenient, but it's not like dry weather makes my skin dry and uncomfortable.

同上，表达一般情况时不需要定冠词“the”。

× Yes, I have the habits about going out.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of going out.

“habits”复数不合适，且搭配应为“have the habit of doing something”，表示习惯做某事。

× I will check the weather forecast and make sure whether I need to take the umbrella.

✓ I will check the weather forecast and make sure whether I need to take an umbrella.

“take the umbrella”中“the”不合适，应为“an umbrella”，表示不特指的雨伞。

× OK, most the most impressed me is the global warming.

✓ OK, what impressed me the most is global warming.

原句结构混乱，应调整为“what impressed me the most is...”表达最让我印象深刻的是……。

× The glacier melted on the two poles that made the seas overflow and drawn some.

✓ The glaciers have melted at the two poles, which has caused the seas to overflow and flood some areas.

“glacier”应为复数“glaciers”，地点用“at”，时态用现在完成时“have melted”，后半句语法错误，需改为“has caused the seas to overflow and flood some areas”。

× Definitely yes. I would like to broaden my eyesight in different area such as Island Island always in the snows and I don't see, I didn't see the snow before.

✓ Definitely yes. I would like to broaden my horizons in different areas such as islands that are always snowy; I have never seen snow before.

“eyesight”用词不当，应为“horizons”；“different area”应为复数“different areas”；“Island Island”重复且不合适，应为“islands”；“always in the snows”表达错误，应为“always snowy”；“I don't see, I didn't see the snow before”时态混乱，应为“I have never seen snow before”。