Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免重复表达，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

例: The weather where I live is usually hot, but sometimes it can be rainy or snowy. I enjoy rainy and snowy days because sunny weather can be a bit boring at times.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误，建议直接表达喜好并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅自然。

例: I don't like very cold or very hot weather. I prefer moderate weather because it is more comfortable, and I believe most people feel the same way.

提案: 回答中逻辑不清且有语法错误，建议明确表达观点，避免矛盾，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I don't like extremely dry or wet weather because they can make people uncomfortable or sick. Therefore, I think moderate weather is best for everyone.

提案: 回答较为重复，建议简化表达并使用连接词，使内容更连贯且避免冗余。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast almost every day, especially before outdoor activities like K-pop dancing events.

提案: 回答内容不准确且表达混乱，建议明确指出气候变化的影响，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: I believe the most serious effect of climate change is global warming. Increased emissions of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide are major contributors to this problem.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates to enjoy their clean scenery. For example, I want to visit New York, Paris, and London.

× Mostly it's hotter Sunday, but sometimes it's also rainy or snowy.

✓ Mostly it's hotter on Sundays, but sometimes it's also rainy or snowy.

这里的Sunday应该用复数形式Sundays，因为表示经常发生的事情时，通常用复数形式。

× Mostly it's hotter Sunday, but sometimes it's also rainy or snowy.

✓ Mostly it's hotter on Sundays, but sometimes it's also rainy or snowy.

表示某天时，应该用介词on，正确表达为'on Sundays'。

× But I like raining and snowy either because I think sunny is not always interesting, sometimes maybe a little boring.

✓ But I like rain and snow either because I think sunny weather is not always interesting, sometimes maybe a little boring.

raining和snowy是形容词或动名词形式，表达喜欢雨和雪时应使用名词rain和snow。

× No, I don't. I don't like cold, very cold or very hot weather because I think I prefer moderate weather is perfect.

✓ No, I don't. I don't like cold, very cold or very hot weather because I think moderate weather is perfect.

句中'I prefer moderate weather is perfect'结构不正确，应去掉'I prefer'，直接表达'moderate weather is perfect'。

× I think everybody all love average temperature because it comforts people.

✓ I think everybody loves average temperature because it comforts people.

everybody是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'loves'，且'all'多余，应去掉。

× No, I don't. I don't like them because I think extremely dry or bad weather make people very comfortable and very sick.

✓ No, I don't. I don't like them because I think extremely dry or bad weather makes people very uncomfortable and very sick.

weather是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'；comfortable应改为uncomfortable，表达不舒服。

× So I think moderate weather is perfect for everyone. I think everybody on like moderate weather.

✓ So I think moderate weather is perfect for everyone. I think everybody likes moderate weather.

everybody是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'likes'；'on'多余，应去掉。

× I often check the weather forecast almost every day, especially when I have some outdoor activities, for example dancing events, K pop dancing events, I often check the weather.

✓ I often check the weather forecast almost every day, especially when I have some outdoor activities, for example, dancing events, K-pop dancing events. I often check the weather.

for example后应加逗号分隔，且K pop应写为K-pop。

× I think the most important problem is global warmth, yes, I think it's the biggest problem for climate change, but I think the more emission of oxygen, diverse and other factors are also very important for.

✓ I think the most important problem is global warming. Yes, I think it's the biggest problem for climate change, but I think the increased emission of carbon dioxide, deforestation and other factors are also very important.

global warmth应为global warming；more emission of oxygen不合适，应为increased emission of carbon dioxide；diverse应为deforestation（砍伐森林）；句尾不完整，应补充完整。

× Yes, of course, I definitely would like to visit other cities because I want to to see other cities sceneries without any pollution.

✓ Yes, of course, I definitely would like to visit other cities because I want to see other cities' scenery without any pollution.

to to是重复，应去掉一个；sceneries应为不可数名词scenery；表示所属关系应使用所有格cities'。