Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" və "umm" kimi sözlər var, bu da təbii danışığı azaldır. Daha qısa və konkret cümlələr qurmağa çalışın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin.

例: The weather in my country is quite changeable. For example, summers are often windy and cloudy, while winters tend to be cold. Therefore, we experience all kinds of weather throughout the year.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlar və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Cavabınızı daha səlis və əlaqəli etmək üçün səbəbləri və nəticələri əlaqələndirici sözlərlə ifadə edin.

例: I definitely prefer cold weather because I dislike sweating. When it's hot, I feel uncomfortable and prefer to stay indoors, which makes the day tiring for me.

提案: Cümlənizdə təkrar sözlər və məntiqi uyğunsuzluq var. Yağışlı havada açıq havada fəaliyyət göstərmək çətin ola bilər. Daha dəqiq və məntiqli ifadələr istifadə edin.

例: I usually prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for outdoor activities. In wet weather, I often feel sticky and reluctant to go outside.

提案: Cümlələriniz qarışıq və anlaşılması çətindir. Daha sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi məntiqli ardıcıllıqla təqdim edin.

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast because my family or friends do it before we go out. Also, if I want to know the weather, I just look outside first.

提案: Cavabınız çox qısa və ümumidir. Daha spesifik təsvirlər və əlaqələndirici sözlər əlavə edin ki, fikriniz daha aydın və təsirli olsun.

例: Climate change has had a huge impact in recent years. For example, many animals have lost their natural habitats, which threatens their survival.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Daha düzgün və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin.

例: Yes, I would like to visit Dubai because it has a very different climate. Unlike my country, which has all four seasons, Dubai is hot all year round, and I am curious about how people live without winter.

× The weather in my country is very changeable because when it's summer it can be sometimes very windy and cloudy, but when it's uh, winter, it can also be umm, like cold.

✓ The weather in my country is very changeable because when it's summer, it can sometimes be very windy and cloudy, but when it's winter, it can also be cold.

The phrase 'can be sometimes' is awkward; 'can sometimes be' is the correct word order for adverbs of frequency. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'uh' and 'umm' should be omitted for clarity.

× But usually every, uh, we have every weather in our country.

✓ But usually, we have all kinds of weather in our country.

The phrase 'every weather' is incorrect; 'all kinds of weather' or 'all types of weather' is the correct quantifier to express variety.

× I definitely prefer cold weather because umm, I don't like sweating and hot weather and when it's hot I can't do anything.

✓ I definitely prefer cold weather because I don't like sweating in hot weather, and when it's hot, I can't do anything.

The conjunction 'and' was used incorrectly to connect 'sweating' and 'hot weather'; 'sweating in hot weather' is the correct phrase. Also, commas improve sentence clarity.

× I usually prefer wet weather because I can do outdoor outdoor activities much more when it's wet outside, but in dry weather I feel sticky and I don't want to go out.

✓ I usually prefer wet weather because I can do outdoor activities much more when it's wet outside, but in dry weather, I feel sticky and don't want to go out.

The repetition 'outdoor outdoor' is a mistake and should be corrected to a single 'outdoor'. Also, a comma after 'dry weather' improves readability.

× No, actually I don't have a kind of habit that for checking the weather forecast because when I go out with my friends or with my parents, they always shake a forecast beforehand.

✓ No, actually I don't have a habit of checking the weather forecast because when I go out with my friends or my parents, they always check the forecast beforehand.

The phrase 'a kind of habit that for checking' is incorrect; 'a habit of checking' is correct. Also, 'shake a forecast' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'check'.

× And also when I really want to know the weather, I first I see the outside, then I go.

✓ Also, when I really want to know the weather, I first look outside, then I go out.

The phrase 'I first I see the outside' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I first look outside'. Also, 'see the outside' is unnatural; 'look outside' is correct.

× There is a huge impact of climate change in recent years.

✓ There has been a huge impact of climate change in recent years.

The present perfect tense 'has been' is appropriate to describe an effect continuing up to the present. Also, 'impact of climate change' is correct, but 'in recent years' requires present perfect tense.

× It affects especially animals, very bad.

✓ It especially affects animals very badly.

The adverb 'especially' should come before the verb 'affects'. 'Very bad' is an adjective phrase incorrectly used; the adverb 'very badly' is correct to modify the verb 'affects'.

× Actually, yes, I would like to visit Dubai. We use there's only somewhere in Dubai and I'm very curious that how they live without winter.

✓ Actually, yes, I would like to visit Dubai. We only have somewhere like that in Dubai, and I'm very curious about how they live without winter.

The phrase 'We use there's only somewhere in Dubai' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'We only have somewhere like that in Dubai'. Also, 'curious that how' should be 'curious about how'.

× For example, in our country we have all of the seasons, but in Dubai there's all summer.

✓ For example, in our country, we have all the seasons, but in Dubai, it's summer all year round.

The phrase 'there's all summer' is incorrect; 'it's summer all year round' correctly expresses the idea. Also, commas improve sentence clarity.