Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases like "Fitness outside" and "I live in a bubble." Try to respond directly to the question with clear, relevant information about the weather. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and natural.

例: I live in the northern part of Iran where the weather is usually humid and muggy. It often rains on most days, making the atmosphere quite damp.

提案: Your answer is confusing and includes irrelevant questions and filler words. Focus on directly answering the question with clear and complete sentences. Avoid asking questions back and reduce hesitation sounds.

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy spending time outdoors and it feels more comfortable to me than cold weather.

提案: You answered the question but your response has many hesitations and some unclear phrases like "we didn't have a sweat with the sweat." Try to speak more fluently and use clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating the question in your answer.

例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable to be outside without sweating, especially during the summer.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "check the forest gas" and "get a get a plan with there." Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary to express your habits.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast at the beginning of each day to plan what to wear before going outside.

提案: You provided some relevant content but your answer has many hesitations and a mispronounced word "wincess" instead of "witness." Try to speak more confidently and clearly, and provide more specific examples with linking words.

例: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events, such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have greatly affected both the environment and people's lives.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear phrases like "Enjoy Madam Vice Show" and grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and use correct sentence structures to express your ideas clearly.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would give me the chance to experience new environments, such as hotter or colder weather than where I live.

× I live in a bubble. It's a north of the Iran and usually the weather is humid and muggy and more of the days are raining.

✓ I live in a bubble. It's in the north of Iran and usually the weather is humid and muggy, and most of the days it rains.

The preposition 'in' is needed before 'the north of Iran' to indicate location. Also, 'more of the days are raining' is incorrect; it should be 'most of the days it rains' to express frequency correctly.

× What's your name? Uh, Will I'm a big a fan of uh, the hot water, uh, hot, uh, weather, uh, and uh, you're done enough as a chimp has under yeah uh and uh, I uh, I'm not patient about the hot weather, especially in.

✓ I am a big fan of hot weather, and I am not patient with the hot weather, especially in summer.

The original sentence contains irrelevant phrases and incorrect pronouns like 'you're done enough as a chimp has under'. These should be removed for clarity. Also, 'not patient about' should be 'not patient with' to use the correct preposition with 'patient'.

× I prefer uh, the dry, uh, weather is better, uh, because, umm, we didn't have a sweat with the sweat, uh, when we go out and especially in summer.

✓ I prefer dry weather because we don't sweat when we go out, especially in summer.

The phrase 'didn't have a sweat with the sweat' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'we don't sweat' to express the idea clearly. Also, 'the dry weather is better' is better expressed as 'dry weather' without 'the' here.

× Yes I I am check the forest gas every usually every first of the day and I can get a get a plan with there especially what should I wear to forgo out for go out? Out.

✓ Yes, I check the forecast usually at the start of the day, and I can make a plan, especially about what I should wear to go out.

The verb 'am check' is incorrect; it should be 'check' for present simple tense. 'Forest gas' is a mishearing of 'forecast'. The phrase 'get a get a plan with there' is unclear and corrected to 'make a plan'. 'Forgo out for go out' is corrected to 'go out'.

× Firstly, we have a wincess more frequent and severe uh, weather events such as uh, hurricanes, foods and droughts.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts.

'Wincess' is a mispronunciation of 'witnessed'. 'Foods' is incorrect and should be 'floods'. The article 'a' before 'wincess' is incorrect because 'witnessed' is a verb here, not a noun.

× Yes, actually I definitely like to visit a different city with different climate and it's give me a experience seeing such as a hot, hotter or different environment can be.

✓ Yes, actually I definitely would like to visit different cities with different climates, and it would give me an experience of seeing environments such as hot, hotter, or different ones.

'With different climate' should be 'with different climates' to match plural. 'It's give me a experience' is incorrect; it should be 'it would give me an experience'. Also, 'seeing such as a hot, hotter or different environment can be' is unclear and corrected for clarity and grammar.