Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'is often rains'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: The weather where I live is quite challenging. It is usually very hot during the day, and it often rains every afternoon, especially in the rainy season. Because of this, people usually carry umbrellas and plan their activities according to the weather.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi như 'I've recovered coded' hay 'feel tired sweetie'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather very uncomfortable. When it's hot, I often feel tired and sweaty, which makes it hard to concentrate. On the other hand, cold weather feels fresh and energizes me.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, tránh lỗi như 'prefer with whether to dry weather' và 'sweet a lot'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I prefer wet weather to dry weather because dry weather often makes my skin feel dehydrated and uncomfortable. Also, when it's dry, I tend to feel more tired and sweat a lot, whereas wet weather helps me feel more refreshed and relaxed.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng, tránh lỗi như 'I take it in the morning' hay 'make sure I dread appropriately'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: To be honest, I rarely check the weather forecast because I usually rely on how I feel outside. However, sometimes I check it in the morning if I have plans to go out, just to make sure I dress appropriately. Overall, I'm not in the habit of checking it regularly.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, phát âm và từ vựng, tránh lặp từ và lỗi như 'most extreme extreme' hay 'natural disease disaster'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác.

例: The most noticeable effects of climate change are the extreme weather events we are seeing, such as record-breaking heat waves globally and an increase in the frequency of natural disasters like typhoons and pollution.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'with the either having snow or it's rain'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

例: Absolutely. I find the idea of experiencing completely different climates fantastic and fascinating. Where I live, the weather is quite consistent, so I would like to visit places that have snow, heavy rain, extremely dry deserts, or intense heat.

× The place where I live has quite challenging weather, is usually very hot during the day and is often rains every afternoon, especially in the rainy season.

✓ The place where I live has quite challenging weather, is usually very hot during the day and often rains every afternoon, especially in the rainy season.

The verb 'rains' should not be preceded by 'is' in this context. 'Rains' is the third person singular present tense form and should be used alone without 'is'. The error is a misuse of the third person singular verb form.

× I've recovered coded to hot weather because I fight the heat very uncomfortable.

✓ I've become accustomed to hot weather because I find the heat very uncomfortable.

The phrase 'recovered coded' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'become accustomed to' to indicate adaptation. Also, 'fight' should be 'find' to express opinion. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and verbs.

× When it's hard, I often feel tired sweetie, which make it hard to concentrate.

✓ When it's hot, I often feel tired and sweaty, which makes it hard to concentrate.

The word 'hard' should be 'hot' to match the context. 'Sweetie' is incorrect; the correct word is 'sweaty' (adjective). The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'which'. This is a third person singular verb agreement issue and incorrect adjective use.

× On the other hand, cold weather feels freshness and energizes to me.

✓ On the other hand, cold weather feels fresh and energizes me.

'Freshness' is a noun but the sentence requires an adjective 'fresh'. Also, 'energizes to me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'energizes me'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and prepositions.

× I prefer with whether to dry weather because dry weather often make my skin feel, uh, dehydrated and uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer wet weather to dry weather because dry weather often makes my skin feel, uh, dehydrated and uncomfortable.

The phrase 'prefer with whether to dry weather' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'prefer wet weather to dry weather'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'dry weather'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and third person singular verb issue.

× Also, when it's dry I tend to feel more tired and sweet a lot, which is influenced wet weather helps me feel more refreshed and relaxed.

✓ Also, when it's dry I tend to feel more tired and sweaty a lot, whereas wet weather helps me feel more refreshed and relaxed.

'Sweet' should be 'sweaty' (adjective). The phrase 'which is influenced wet weather helps me' is incorrect; it should be 'whereas wet weather helps me'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and conjunctions.

× However, sometimes I take it in the morning if I have a plane to go out just to make sure I dread appropriately.

✓ However, sometimes I check it in the morning if I have plans to go out just to make sure I dress appropriately.

'Take it' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'check it' referring to the weather forecast. 'Plane' should be 'plans'. 'Dread' should be 'dress'. This is an incorrect use of verbs and vocabulary.

× The most noticable effect are the most extreme extreme weather events where we are seeing in record-breaking heat wave globally and the increases in frequency of intensive natural disease disaster like typhoon and pollute.

✓ The most noticeable effects are the extreme weather events we are seeing, such as record-breaking heat waves globally and increases in the frequency of intense natural disasters like typhoons and pollution.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' to agree with 'are'. 'Extreme' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Heat wave' should be plural 'heat waves'. 'Intensive natural disease disaster' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'intense natural disasters'. 'Typhoon' should be plural 'typhoons'. 'Pollute' is a verb; the noun 'pollution' is correct here. This is a singular/plural issue and incorrect word usage.

× Absolutely. I find the idea of experiencing completely different climates fantastic, fascinating.

✓ Absolutely. I find the idea of experiencing completely different climates fantastic and fascinating.

Two adjectives describing the same noun should be connected with a conjunction like 'and'. This is an incorrect use of conjunctions and adjective coordination.

× Where I live the weather is quite consistent, so I like to visit somewhere with the either having snow or it's rain, extremely dry deserts, the heat.

✓ Where I live, the weather is quite consistent, so I like to visit places that either have snow or rain, extremely dry deserts, or heat.

'Somewhere with the either having' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'places that either have'. 'It's rain' should be 'rain'. The list needs proper conjunctions and parallel structure. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure.