WeatherPart 1 採点レポート

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会話

Part 1

試験官

What's the weather like where you live?

受験者

I live in Shenzhen and the weather here is hot and sunny, but sometimes we may encounter storms with heavy rain.

試験官

Do you prefer cold or hot weather?

受験者

I prefer cold weather because I can wear all my heavy and thick clothes during a cold winter, but for a hot summer, I cannot stand the hot waves.

試験官

Do you prefer dry or wet weather?

受験者

I prefer wet weather because dry weather will make my skin itchy and it's really unpleasant and uncomfortable for me. But wet weather is more suitable for me as it provides more water in the air.

試験官

Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?

受験者

Yes, I'm used to check the weather every day because in Shenzhen the weather is quite fickle, so it may be sunny in the morning but raining heavily in the evening, so it's very necessary.

試験官

What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?

受験者

I believe that global warming is true and the summer during these years are actually getting hotter and hotter, so it's actually very important for us to reduce the carbon emissions and protect our planet.

試験官

Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?

受験者

Yes, I would like to because this offers a diversity view of different climates and it may broaden my perspectives.

評価

総合

総合: 6.5流暢さと一貫性: 7.0発音: 6.5文法: 6.5語彙: 6.5

Part 1

What's the weather like where you live?

スコア: 85.0

提案: 回答较为自然且内容完整,但可以增加一些具体细节,使描述更生动。建议在描述天气时加入季节变化或具体月份的天气特点。

: I live in Shenzhen, where the weather is generally hot and sunny, especially during the summer months. However, in the rainy season, we often experience sudden storms with heavy rain and strong winds.

Do you prefer cold or hot weather?

スコア: 80.0

提案: 回答表达了个人喜好,但理由较为简单。建议增加更多具体原因和感受,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing warm clothes like sweaters and coats, which make me feel cozy. Moreover, cold weather is more comfortable for me since I dislike sweating and feeling sticky during hot summers.

Do you prefer dry or wet weather?

スコア: 85.0

提案: 回答内容具体且有个人感受,但表达略显重复。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇,使表达更流畅。

: I prefer wet weather because dry conditions often cause my skin to become itchy and uncomfortable. Additionally, the moisture in the air during wet weather helps keep my skin hydrated and feels more refreshing.

Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?

スコア: 90.0

提案: 回答内容完整且逻辑清晰,但语法上有小错误。建议注意时态和习惯用法,同时可以简化句子结构。

: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because the weather in Shenzhen is quite unpredictable. For example, it might be sunny in the morning but rain heavily in the evening, so it's important to stay informed.

What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?

スコア: 88.0

提案: 回答观点明确,但句子结构稍显重复。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇,表达更自然。

: I believe global warming is real, as summers have become increasingly hotter in recent years. Therefore, it is crucial for us to reduce carbon emissions and take active measures to protect our planet.

Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?

スコア: 85.0

提案: 回答表达了意愿,但用词和句式较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达和具体说明原因。

: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because experiencing diverse weather conditions can broaden my horizons and help me understand various cultures better.

文法

Present tense issue

× Yes, I'm used to check the weather every day because in Shenzhen the weather is quite fickle, so it may be sunny in the morning but raining heavily in the evening, so it's very necessary.

Yes, I'm used to checking the weather every day because in Shenzhen the weather is quite fickle, so it may be sunny in the morning but raining heavily in the evening, so it's very necessary.

“be used to”后面应该接动名词形式(-ing),表示习惯于某事。原句中“used to check”错误地使用了动词原形,正确用法是“used to checking”。

重要語彙

ColdChilly; Unfriendly
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
DryArid; Parched; Thirsty; Dull; Unemotional
HeavyWeighty; Overweight; Forceful; Arduous; Onerous
HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
SunnyBright; Cheerful; Optimistic
WetDamp; Rainy; Sticky; Aqueous; Dampen
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