Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to start your answer directly about the weather and avoid unrelated words like 'Tired'. Use clear and concise sentences, and connect your ideas logically. For example, mention the weather first, then explain why you don't like it, and finally give a preference with reasons. Avoid repetition and incorrect grammar such as 'I feel so comfort'.

例: The weather in the UAE is usually very hot and dry, which I find uncomfortable. I prefer colder climates because I feel more comfortable and enjoy the winter atmosphere. For example, I like how winter makes me feel cozy and relaxed.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and repeating phrases such as 'this and this weather'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide more specific reasons for your preference.

例: I prefer cold weather because I have never experienced snow living in the UAE. Cold weather feels cozy to me, and I enjoy activities like drinking hot chocolate during winter. Therefore, I find cold climates more appealing.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and try to explain your reasons more clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples to support your preference. Also, correct grammar such as 'wet floors when it's rainy' to a more natural expression.

例: I prefer wet weather because, unlike some people who find it annoying, I enjoy the lively atmosphere it creates. For instance, rainy days make the environment fresh and exciting, and I love the feeling of walking on wet streets during winter.

提案: Try to give a complete and clear answer without informal or incomplete phrases like 'I don't really wanna know like'. Explain briefly why you don't check the weather and how often if you do. Avoid mentioning laziness directly; instead, you can say you don't find it necessary.

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I don't find it necessary in my daily routine. Sometimes, I check it if I have plans that might be affected by the weather.

提案: Try to focus on the question and give a clear opinion about climate change effects. Avoid irrelevant personal habits and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples related to climate change.

例: Although I don't follow news about climate change closely, I have noticed that in the UAE, it has been hotter and drier recently. For example, there has been very little rain, which might be a result of climate change.

提案: Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasons with linking words. Use correct grammar such as 'I live in the UAE, which has hot weather'.

例: Yes, I would like to visit Canada because it has a cold climate and snow, which I have never experienced living in the UAE. Experiencing winter there would be exciting and different from my usual hot weather.