Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，影响表达的流畅性。建议减少重复，注意句子结构，使表达更自然。

例: The weather in Nanjing is quite pleasant. It is warm in spring and hot in summer, while winters are also mild. Overall, I think the climate is suitable for living.

提案: 回答中有较多重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达观点，并用连词连接句子。

例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy snow, which makes the city look beautiful. Also, I feel uncomfortable and tired when the weather is very hot.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够准确。建议注意时态和词汇使用，避免重复，表达更具体。

例: I prefer wet weather because I live in a humid place, so I am used to it. Also, dry weather tends to make my skin feel uncomfortable.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，影响表达清晰。建议简洁表达习惯，并用连词连接句子。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning. This helps me decide what clothes to wear for the day.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不完整。建议理清句子结构，使用连词，具体说明气候变化的影响。

例: In recent years, summers have become longer and hotter, while autumns are shorter. This is due to global warming, which causes temperature rises worldwide and fewer rainy days in summer.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误多。建议简洁明了地表达愿望，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it is a good opportunity to experience new weather and cultures.

× It it it is warm in spring and hot in summer on and and warm in winter too.

✓ It is warm in spring, hot in summer, and warm in winter too.

句中有多余的重复词汇，且季节名词应保持单数形式。去除多余词汇，保持季节名词单数，表达更准确。

× I love I love snows which makes the city more beautiful.

✓ I love snow which makes the city more beautiful.

“snow”作为不可数名词，不用复数形式。将“snows”改为“snow”更符合英语习惯。

× Well I prefer too wet weather because on the place I live is very wet so I was suitable for the weather.

✓ Well, I prefer wet weather because the place I live is very wet so it is suitable for the weather.

“on the place”用法错误，应为“the place”。“too wet weather”中“too”用法不当，应去掉。句子结构调整使表达更通顺。

× So I always check the weather forecast in the morning and to find my find the most suitable clothes for me.

✓ So I always check the weather forecast in the morning to find the most suitable clothes for me.

句中“my find”重复且错误，应去除“my”。保持句子结构简洁正确。

× we have a hotter summer and have fewer rainy in summer this years because the global warming and and the temperature rises the all over the world so.

✓ We have a hotter summer and fewer rainy days in summer this year because of global warming and the temperature rising all over the world.

“rainy”应为“rainy days”表示复数名词；“this years”应为“this year”单数；“because the global warming”应为“because of global warming”。修正名词单复数及介词使用。

× Yes, I really like to visit on that have different climates from where I live, because I think it was very nice opportunity to fill in the others other cities climates and weathers also on other sit also.

✓ Yes, I really like to visit places that have different climates from where I live, because I think it is a very nice opportunity to experience other cities' climates and weathers.

“visit on that”用法错误，应为“visit places that”；“fill in”用法错误，应为“experience”；“others other cities climates”重复且错误，应为“other cities' climates”；“sit”应为“site”或省略。修正介词和词汇使用。