Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use a simple structure: state the weather, then explain why you like it with specific reasons. For example, say "I like the weather where I live because it is often warm and sunny, which makes me feel comfortable."

例: I like the weather where I live because it is often warm and sunny. This kind of weather allows me to spend more time outdoors and enjoy activities like walking or cycling.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Try to express your preference clearly and give reasons using simple and correct sentences. Avoid unclear words like "bowling weather."

例: I definitely prefer hot weather because I don't like rain or cold temperatures. Hot weather makes me feel more energetic and comfortable.

提案: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to use correct grammar and complete your thoughts. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer dry weather because I live in a place with a dry climate. I am used to these temperatures, and dry weather feels more comfortable for me than wet weather.

提案: Your answer is understandable but repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same phrase and explain your habit more naturally. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning. This helps me plan my day and decide what to wear before going outside.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks specific details. Try to explain the effects clearly and use complete sentences. Add examples or reasons to support your opinion.

例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events recently, such as floods and heatwaves. This is mainly because of pollution that damages the atmosphere.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Also, directly answer the question and provide reasons or examples.

例: Honestly, I have never visited countries with very different climates. But I would like to try because it would be interesting to experience new weather and cultures.

× I didn't like cold weather, so because I can't. Wear my.

✓ I don't like cold weather, so I can't wear my clothes comfortably.

The student incorrectly used the past tense 'didn't like' when referring to a general preference, which should be in the present tense. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be completed properly to convey the intended meaning.

× I definitely prefer hot weather because I didn't like to be drizzling and I always want to be like in bowling weather, even in cold weather because it's uncomfortable for me.

✓ I definitely prefer hot weather because I don't like drizzling, and I always want to be in boiling weather, even though cold weather is uncomfortable for me.

The student incorrectly used past tense 'didn't like' when expressing a current preference, which should be in present tense. Also, 'to be drizzling' is awkward; 'don't like drizzling' is better. 'Like in bowling weather' seems to be a mispronunciation or error; corrected to 'in boiling weather' to match intended meaning.

× I think the dry weather is more comfortable for me than wet weather because the place where I live has dry weather and I get used to live in this temperatures and this climate, so that's on.

✓ I think dry weather is more comfortable for me than wet weather because the place where I live has dry weather, and I am used to living in these temperatures and this climate, so that's why.

The phrase 'get used to live' is incorrect; the correct form is 'get used to living' because 'used to' is followed by a gerund. Also, 'this temperatures' should be 'these temperatures' to agree in number. 'So that's on' is unclear and corrected to 'so that's why' for clarity.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast. I always watch the weather forecast because if I don't do this, I can't go outside because I need to know about weather.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast. I always watch it because if I don't, I can't go outside since I need to know about the weather.

The sentence is mostly correct but can be improved for clarity. 'If I don't do this' is vague; 'if I don't' is sufficient. Also, 'know about weather' should be 'know about the weather' to use the definite article correctly.

× I think the atmospheric pollution effects on the climate change in recent years and it disrupted our atmosphere and our climate became more.

✓ I think atmospheric pollution has affected climate change in recent years; it has disrupted our atmosphere, and our climate has become more unstable.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper verb forms. 'Effects' should be 'has affected' to indicate action. 'Climate became more' is incomplete; it needs an adjective like 'unstable' to complete the thought.

× Honestly I've never been at the countries with such big different climate, I always travel to the countries with the same other like in my town and it always sunny, warm, sometimes boiling but I like.

✓ Honestly, I've never been to countries with such a big different climate. I always travel to countries with climates similar to my town, which is always sunny, warm, and sometimes boiling, but I like it.

The phrase 'been at the countries' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'been to countries.' 'Big different climate' should be 'a big different climate' or better 'a very different climate.' The sentence is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity. Also, 'same other like in my town' is unclear and corrected to 'climates similar to my town.'