Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, concise description of the weather and avoid repeating words. Also, mention the seasons briefly and express your preference clearly.

例: I live in Bangladesh, where the weather is generally warm and humid. We have six distinct seasons, including winter, which I enjoy the most because it is cooler and more comfortable.

提案: Your answer shows your preference but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel more comfortable and refreshed. When winter comes, I feel happy because the cooler temperatures are enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Please try to clearly state your preference between dry or wet weather and explain why, using simple and correct sentences.

例: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside and do activities. Wet weather can be inconvenient and make traveling difficult.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Please clearly state whether you check the weather forecast, how often, and when, using simple sentences.

例: No, I usually do not check the weather forecast. Sometimes, I check it in the morning if I have plans to go outside.

提案: You did not provide an answer. Please try to give a brief opinion on the effects of climate change, mentioning specific impacts if possible.

例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather, like floods and heatwaves, which affect people's lives and the environment.

提案: You did not provide an answer. Please try to express your interest or disinterest in visiting cities with different climates and explain why.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new weather and cultures, such as colder places during winter.

× In our country there are six season season a six season.

✓ In our country, there are six seasons.

The word 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to multiple seasons. Also, the phrase 'season season a six season' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'there are six seasons.'

× It ranges ranges.

✓ It varies.

The repetition 'ranges ranges' is incorrect and unclear. The verb 'range' can be used, but here 'varies' is more appropriate to express variation in seasons or weather. Also, 'ranges' is singular third person present tense, but the subject is unclear. Replacing with 'It varies' clarifies the meaning.

× cold weather keeps me, keeps me become cooler and more comfortable so I am feel happy I winter season coming.

✓ Cold weather keeps me cooler and more comfortable, so I feel happy when the winter season comes.

The phrase 'keeps me become' is incorrect; 'keeps' should be followed by an adjective or noun, not 'become.' Also, 'I am feel happy' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel happy.' The phrase 'I winter season coming' is ungrammatical; it should be 'when the winter season comes.' The corrected sentence uses proper verb forms and conjunctions.

× In my opinion, I prefer white or other. The oyder Hoyen became oyette the circumstances of our country.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer dry weather. The other season depends on the circumstances of our country.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words 'white or other' and 'oyder Hoyen became oyette,' which seem to be misspellings or mispronunciations. Assuming the intended meaning is 'dry or wet,' the correction clarifies the preference and uses correct pronouns and vocabulary.

× No, I have to check checking the oil forecasts on the House.

✓ No, I have to check the weather forecasts at home.

The phrase 'have to check checking' is incorrect; 'have to' should be followed by the base verb 'check,' not the gerund 'checking.' Also, 'oil forecasts' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'weather forecasts.' 'On the House' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at home.'

× Hello.

✓ [No correction possible due to lack of content.]

The response 'Hello.' does not answer the question and lacks content to correct. No grammatical correction can be made.