Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторов и неточностей, используйте связные предложения и точные описания.

例: The weather where I live is quite extreme. Winters are very cold, while summers can be quite hot. Our capital city experiences a continental climate and is known as one of the coldest capitals in the world.

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и логичным, избегайте повторов и неполных предложений. Используйте связки для плавного перехода между идеями.

例: I prefer hot weather because I live in a country where most days are cold. From September until autumn, the weather is especially chilly, so I enjoy warmer temperatures more.

提案: Старайтесь строить предложения более грамотно и логично, избегайте обрывистых фраз. Используйте связки для объяснения своих предпочтений.

例: I usually prefer dry weather, but I enjoy wet weather when it's warm. However, when it's cold and windy, wet weather feels unpleasant. For example, rainy days in summer can be quite comfortable.

提案: Ответ должен быть полным и понятным. Избегайте неполных и бессвязных предложений. Чётко отвечайте на вопрос, указывая частоту и время проверки прогноза.

例: I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house. This helps me plan my day better.

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и содержательным. Используйте конкретные примеры и объяснения, избегайте бессвязных фраз.

例: Climate change has caused the weather to become hotter in recent years. This leads to problems like water shortages and extreme heat, which affect people's daily lives.

提案: Ответ должен быть более чётким и связным. Избегайте повторов и неясных выражений. Расскажите о своих мечтах и предпочтениях более подробно.

例: I dream of visiting countries with different climates from mine. For example, I would love to see Antarctica's icy landscape and experience the warm weather in Africa.

× It's usually risk of continental and our capital is the one of the most coldest capital in the world.

✓ There is usually a risk of continental weather, and our capital is one of the coldest capitals in the world.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'There is' to indicate existence (There be issue). 'Risk' is a singular noun and needs an article 'a'. 'The one of the most coldest' is incorrect; 'one of the coldest' is correct because 'coldest' is already a superlative, so 'most' is redundant.

× The weather is cold in winter and hot in in summer.

✓ The weather is cold in winter and hot in summer.

The preposition 'in' is repeated twice before 'summer', which is incorrect. Only one 'in' is needed before a season.

× I prefer hot weather because I live in the country where where the days are always cold, most cold days.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I live in a country where the days are always cold, mostly cold days.

The word 'where' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'most cold days' is incorrect; 'mostly cold days' or 'most days are cold' is better. 'The country' should be 'a country' unless a specific country is known.

× So the from from September till autumn the weather is very cold and only.

✓ So from September till autumn, the weather is very cold only.

The phrase 'the from from' is incorrect; 'from' is repeated. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and only' which is incomplete and unclear.

× Of course I have preferred dry weather, but sometimes I like wet weather when it is warm.

✓ Of course, I prefer dry weather, but sometimes I like wet weather when it is warm.

The present perfect 'have preferred' is not appropriate here; simple present 'prefer' is better to express general preference.

× When it is cold and too windy, the wet weather is terrible.

✓ When it is cold and too windy, wet weather is terrible.

The definite article 'the' before 'wet weather' is unnecessary here because we are talking about wet weather in general.

× I usually check the weather because forecast every morning.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning.

The phrase 'because forecast' is incorrect; 'weather forecast' is a noun phrase and should not be separated by 'because' here.

× Usually the weather becoming more hotter and hotter.

✓ Usually, the weather becomes hotter and hotter.

The verb 'becoming' needs an auxiliary verb 'is' to form present continuous, but here simple present 'becomes' is more appropriate to express a general trend. Also, 'more hotter' is incorrect; 'hotter' alone is sufficient.

× People would possibly more water than you.

✓ People would possibly use more water than before.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Would possibly more water than you' lacks a verb and object. Adding 'use' clarifies the meaning.

× Just do that.

✓ Just do that.

This sentence is correct but lacks context; no grammatical error detected.

× Even more hot.

✓ It is even hotter.

The phrase 'Even more hot' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'It is' and using the comparative 'hotter' makes it correct.

× Never hot.

✓ It is never hot.

The phrase 'Never hot' is incomplete; adding 'It is' makes it a complete sentence.

× Oh, it's my dream to visit different countries and different, to visit countries with different climates, to be, to see pink beans, to visit Antarctica, to visit Africa.

✓ Oh, it's my dream to visit different countries with different climates, to see penguins, to visit Antarctica, and to visit Africa.

The phrase 'different, to visit countries' is repetitive and unclear. 'Pink beans' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'penguins'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.