Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует давать чёткий и связный ответ, используя правильные конструкции и избегая лишних слов.

例: The weather where I live is very cold, especially in winter when temperatures can drop to minus 15 degrees Celsius.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не полностью раскрывает причину предпочтения. Следует использовать правильные времена и более подробно объяснять своё мнение.

例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy the fresh air and I have grown up in a cold country, so I am used to it.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит повторения и бессвязные фразы. Нужно давать чёткий ответ с логическим объяснением и избегать пауз и повторов.

例: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the sound of rain and find it refreshing.

提案: Ответ неструктурирован и содержит ошибки. Следует ясно ответить на вопрос, используя связные предложения и правильную грамматику.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning, especially in winter, to know if it will be very cold or snowy.

提案: Ответ показывает отсутствие понимания темы и содержит много ошибок. Рекомендуется подготовить простое мнение и использовать базовую лексику для выражения своих мыслей.

例: I think climate change causes more extreme weather, like hotter summers and colder winters.

提案: Ответ неполный и содержит паузы. Следует давать полный ответ с объяснением, используя связные слова.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather and cultures.

× The visitors were cold because I live in Yakult Niagara, so very cold and winter so cold in 15.

✓ The weather was cold because I live in Yakult Niagara, so it is very cold and winter temperatures are around -15 degrees.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'visitors' which is plural and unrelated to weather. The subject should be 'weather' which is singular. Also, 'in 15' is unclear and should specify temperature as '-15 degrees'. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch and clarifies meaning.

× I prefer cold weather because I love cold and I've grow up in so-called country.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I love the cold and I've grown up in a rural country.

The verb phrase 'I've grow up' is incorrect; the past participle 'grown' should be used with 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'so-called country' is unclear; 'rural country' or 'countryside' is more appropriate.

× I prefer prefer wet weather because I like rain and uh. No, she cheaper.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I like rain. No, it's cheaper.

The word 'prefer' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'No, she cheaper' is incorrect; 'she' should be 'it' referring to weather, and 'cheaper' needs a verb 'is'. This corrects sentence structure and pronoun use.

× Yes I'm checking the weather because I but in the winter because in -15. We don't study and are relaxing when I'm see the weather -510.

✓ Yes, I check the weather, especially in winter when it's -15 degrees. We don't study and relax when I see the weather forecast for -5 to -10 degrees.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and unclear phrasing. 'I'm checking' is present continuous but should be simple present 'I check' for habitual action. 'I'm see' is incorrect; should be 'I see'. Numbers need clarification and proper prepositions.

× I don't know. I'm not shaking and I'm not interesting to claim it because I don't know and I'm don't understand the climate and so.

✓ I don't know. I'm not sure and I'm not interested in climate change because I don't understand it well.

'I'm not shaking' is incorrect; likely meant 'I'm not sure'. 'I'm not interesting' should be 'I'm not interested'. 'I'm don't understand' is incorrect; should be 'I don't understand'. Pronouns and verb forms are corrected for clarity.