Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'seasons' thay vì 'seasoned', và tránh lỗi số nhiều. Ngoài ra, nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: I live in central Vietnam, which has a tropical climate. There are mainly two seasons: the dry season, which is very hot, and the rainy season, when it often pours heavily.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả các từ chuyên ngành như 'UVA' và 'UVB'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear different styles of winter clothes, and I don't have to worry about harmful UV rays like UVA and UVB.

提案: Câu trả lời không đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi (dry or wet weather). Bạn cần trả lời đúng câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại câu trả lời trước đó. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý chính tả và ngữ pháp.

例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or catching a cold.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'make effective precautions' thay vì 'make effectively precautioned'. Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I always check the weather forecast app on my phone every evening. This helps me prepare by bringing an umbrella or wearing suitable clothes for the next day.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, dùng thì đúng và từ vựng phù hợp như 'sea levels rising' thay vì 'rising to sea level' và 'ice melt' thay vì 'ice smell'.

例: In recent years, climate change has become a global issue affecting many aspects of the environment, such as global warming, rising sea levels, and melting ice.

提案: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'And I have say' và câu nên mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và đúng ngữ pháp.

例: I live in a tropical climate, so I have never seen real snow. I dream of visiting a European city in winter to experience snowfall.

× I live in the center part of Vietnam which have tropical climate.

✓ I live in the central part of Vietnam which has a tropical climate.

The subject 'which' refers to 'the central part of Vietnam', which is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'center part' should be 'central part' and 'tropical climate' needs an article 'a'.

× There are mainly 2 seasoned in my areas.

✓ There are mainly 2 seasons in my area.

The word 'seasoned' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'seasons'. Also, 'areas' should be singular 'area' to match the context.

× In dry seasoned is boiling hot but in rainy season it's rain downpour.

✓ The dry season is boiling hot, but in the rainy season, it rains heavily.

'Seasoned' should be 'season'. 'It's rain downpour' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it rains heavily' or 'there is heavy rain'.

× I favor cold weather over hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' is 'to', not 'over'.

× Seen in cold weather I can dress up with different style of winter clothes and I have no worries about UVARUVB right?

✓ In cold weather, I can dress up in different styles of winter clothes and I have no worries about UVA/UVB, right?

'Seen' is incorrect; it should be 'In'. 'Style' should be plural 'styles' to match 'different'. 'Dress up with' should be 'dress up in'. 'UVARUVB' should be 'UVA/UVB'.

× I prefer cold weather over hot weather since in cold weather I can dress up with different style of winter clothes and have no worries about UVAUVB race.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather since in cold weather I can dress up in different styles of winter clothes and have no worries about UVA/UVB rays.

Same as previous: 'prefer ... to', 'dress up in', 'styles' plural, and 'UVA/UVB rays' is the correct term.

× In contrast, in hot weather I can easily lose my temper.

✓ In contrast, in hot weather, I can easily lose my temper.

Added comma after 'hot weather' for clarity.

× Thanks to this habit, I can make effectively precautioned by bringing umbrella or preparing suitable clothes for the next day.

✓ Thanks to this habit, I can take effective precautions by bringing an umbrella or preparing suitable clothes for the next day.

'Make effectively precautioned' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take effective precautions'. Also, 'umbrella' needs an article 'an'.

× In recent years, climate change have become a present issue of everyone in the world is affect numerous aspects of the environment such as global warming are rising to sea level or ice smell.

✓ In recent years, climate change has become a pressing issue for everyone in the world and affects numerous aspects of the environment such as global warming, rising sea levels, or melting ice.

'Climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'has become'. The sentence structure is incorrect and confusing; it needs to be rephrased for clarity. 'Are rising to sea level' should be 'rising sea levels'. 'Ice smell' is incorrect; it should be 'melting ice'.

× And I have say I live in tropical climate so I never see a real snow in reality, so that I have a dream of visiting Europe city to see snow formed in the winter.

✓ I have to say I live in a tropical climate, so I have never seen real snow in reality. Therefore, I dream of visiting a European city to see snow in winter.

The sentence is awkward and contains multiple errors: 'have say' should be 'have to say'; 'in tropical climate' needs an article 'a'; 'never see' should be 'have never seen'; 'Europe city' should be 'a European city'; 'snow formed in the winter' is better as 'snow in winter'. The sentence is split for clarity.