Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repeating the same words and make your answer more natural by using synonyms and varying sentence structure. Also, add a bit more detail to enrich your response.

例: The weather where I live is usually cold, which I really enjoy because it makes me feel refreshed and energized.

提案: Avoid repeating phrases like 'I like the cold weather' and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about why cold weather energizes you.

例: I prefer cold weather because it boosts my energy levels, allowing me to spend more time outdoors comfortably.

提案: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, be more specific about the difficulties wet weather causes.

例: I actually prefer dry weather because wet conditions make commuting to work and doing household chores much more difficult.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repetition. Be specific about when and why you check the forecast.

例: Yes, I make it a habit to check the weather forecast every day, especially because it often rains where I live, and I want to be prepared before going to work.

提案: Clarify your ideas and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples of climate change effects.

例: I believe climate change has caused global warming, which has led to more frequent rainfall, droughts, and heat waves in recent years.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about what you hope to learn or enjoy.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would help me understand how temperature affects my body and allow me to enjoy diverse weather conditions.

× Actually I prefer dry weather because in wet weather much difficult to uh commute for uh, job and other doing household task.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather because in wet weather it is much more difficult to commute for work and to do other household tasks.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'is much difficult' and uses incorrect phrasing 'for uh, job and other doing household task'. The correction adds the subject and corrects the phrase to 'commute for work and to do other household tasks' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it's I prefer driver.

✓ So, I prefer dry weather.

The original sentence 'So it's I prefer driver' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. The correction clarifies the intended meaning as 'So, I prefer dry weather.'

× Yes I I am a habit of checking the weather forecast daily because in areas which I live there are mostly rain rain.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast daily because in the area where I live, it mostly rains.

The phrase 'I am a habit' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I have a habit'. Also, 'in areas which I live' should be 'in the area where I live' for natural phrasing. 'There are mostly rain rain' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'it mostly rains'.

× So when I go for the job then I check daily basis weather forecast.

✓ So when I go to work, I check the weather forecast daily.

The phrase 'go for the job' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to work'. 'Check daily basis weather forecast' is awkward; corrected to 'check the weather forecast daily' for natural English usage.

× I think the effects of the climate change are global marking.

✓ I think the effects of climate change are global warming.

The phrase 'global marking' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'global warming'. Also, 'the climate change' should be 'climate change' without 'the'.

× In recent years, due to global warming, there are increase in the increase in the rainfall and droughts and heat waves.

✓ In recent years, due to global warming, there has been an increase in rainfall, droughts, and heat waves.

The phrase 'there are increase in the increase in the rainfall' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Corrected to 'there has been an increase in rainfall, droughts, and heat waves' to properly use singular 'increase' with singular verb 'has been' and list the phenomena correctly.

× Yes, I would like to visit the cities there have the different climates, uh, because by doing this I can learn more about the different, uh, impact of the temperature on my body and I can enjoy the weather both of the other countries.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit cities that have different climates because by doing this I can learn more about the different impacts of temperature on my body and enjoy the weather in other countries.

The phrase 'the cities there have the different climates' is incorrect; corrected to 'cities that have different climates'. 'The different impact' should be plural 'different impacts'. 'Enjoy the weather both of the other countries' is awkward; corrected to 'enjoy the weather in other countries'.