Weather— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What's the weather like where you live?
受験者
My smart located in the north side in my country. It's better like to the very dry state in my country and better like to be mostly warm the most time of the year.
試験官
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
受験者
I like Lima, the cold weather because in this type of weather I have to do the more work of full of energy and I see and my body is not to feel the tiredness on that type of weather.
試験官
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
受験者
You want the wet weather in my hometown side because I want the that weather because of I have to do work and exercise full of energy because in the dry weather body cannot to do work for the long time.
試験官
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
受験者
Yes, he check the weather forecast in my phone, mobile phone because my family work in agriculture and my father asked to me to check the weather because I have to do the any work on my land.
試験官
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
受験者
I think in the previous years climate did the most effectively affect to the weather and society and nature because I seen that some plants are not to be grown these type they are.
試験官
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
受験者
Yes, I want to to visit any other cities which I have to mostly difference a different weather rather than my hometown because that time somewhere in my home town side that time in the Hamachi city they have to provide the cold weather. So that time I asked my.
評価
総合
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
スコア: 40.0提案: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਦੀ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ, ਅਤੇ ਇਹ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਓ, ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ।
例: I live in the northern part of my country. The weather there is mostly dry and warm throughout the year.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
スコア: 45.0提案: ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਸਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਿਆਖਿਆ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ। ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਵਿਆਖਿਆ ਕਰੋ।
例: I prefer cold weather because it gives me more energy to work and I don't feel tired easily in cold conditions.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
スコア: 40.0提案: ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਹਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹਨ। ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸੰਖੇਪ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਜੋ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਸਵਾਲ ਦਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਵੇ।
例: I prefer wet weather in my hometown because it helps me stay energetic while working and exercising, unlike dry weather which makes me tired quickly.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
スコア: 50.0提案: ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹਨ। ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਜਾਣਕਾਰੀ ਦਿਓ।
例: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my mobile phone regularly because my family works in agriculture, and my father asks me to check it before working on our land.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
スコア: 45.0提案: ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਅਤੇ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਨਹੀਂ ਹਨ। ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਵਿਆਖਿਆ ਕਰੋ।
例: I think climate change has greatly affected the weather, society, and nature in recent years. For example, some plants that used to grow well no longer do.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
スコア: 40.0提案: ਜਵਾਬ ਅਧੂਰਾ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਭਰਪੂਰ ਹੈ। ਪੂਰਾ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਜੋ ਸਵਾਲ ਨੂੰ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਵੇ।
例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from my hometown. For example, I want to experience colder weather in places like Hamachi city.
文法
× My smart located in the north side in my country.
✓ My town is located in the north side of my country.
The pronoun 'My smart' is incorrect; it should be 'My town'. Also, the verb 'located' needs an auxiliary verb 'is' to form the present tense passive voice. The preposition 'in' should be 'of' when referring to a part of a country.
× It's better like to the very dry state in my country and better like to be mostly warm the most time of the year.
✓ It is similar to the very dry state in my country and is mostly warm most of the time during the year.
The phrase 'better like to' is incorrect; 'similar to' or 'like' should be used. Also, 'the most time' should be 'most of the time'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.
× I like Lima, the cold weather because in this type of weather I have to do the more work of full of energy and I see and my body is not to feel the tiredness on that type of weather.
✓ I like Lima's cold weather because in this type of weather I can work with more energy and I feel that my body does not get tired in this kind of weather.
The sentence has incorrect pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'I like Lima, the cold weather' should be 'I like Lima's cold weather'. 'I have to do the more work of full of energy' is incorrect; it should be 'I can work with more energy'. 'I see and my body is not to feel the tiredness' should be 'I feel that my body does not get tired'.
× You want the wet weather in my hometown side because I want the that weather because of I have to do work and exercise full of energy because in the dry weather body cannot to do work for the long time.
✓ I prefer the wet weather in my hometown because I can work and exercise with full energy. In dry weather, the body cannot work for a long time.
The pronoun 'You' is incorrect; it should be 'I'. The phrase 'I want the that weather because of I have to do work' is incorrect and should be rephrased for clarity. 'Body cannot to do work' is incorrect; it should be 'the body cannot work'.
× Yes, he check the weather forecast in my phone, mobile phone because my family work in agriculture and my father asked to me to check the weather because I have to do the any work on my land.
✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast on my mobile phone because my family works in agriculture and my father asks me to check the weather since I have to do work on my land.
The pronoun 'he' is incorrect; it should be 'I'. 'Asked to me' is incorrect; it should be 'asks me'. 'Do the any work' is incorrect; it should be 'do any work'.
× I think in the previous years climate did the most effectively affect to the weather and society and nature because I seen that some plants are not to be grown these type they are.
✓ I think in previous years climate has most effectively affected the weather, society, and nature because I have seen that some plants do not grow like they used to.
The verb 'did the most effectively affect' is awkward and incorrect; 'has most effectively affected' is correct. 'I seen' should be 'I have seen'. 'Are not to be grown these type they are' is incorrect and should be 'do not grow like they used to'.
× Yes, I want to to visit any other cities which I have to mostly difference a different weather rather than my hometown because that time somewhere in my home town side that time in the Hamachi city they have to provide the cold weather. So that time I asked my.
✓ Yes, I want to visit other cities that have mostly different weather than my hometown because sometimes in my hometown, the weather is different, but in Hamachi city, they have cold weather. So, I asked my...
The sentence has multiple pronoun and structural errors. 'I want to to visit any other cities which I have to mostly difference a different weather' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to visit other cities that have mostly different weather'. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.
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