Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不自然。建议学习正确的天气描述词汇，如'sunny'，并用简单句子直接描述天气情况。

例: The weather where I live is usually sunny and warm.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用错误。建议使用连贯的句子表达喜好，并用具体理由支持观点。

例: I prefer hot weather because I can enjoy ice cream and go swimming, which I don't like to do in cold weather.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不连贯。建议学习正确的形容词和连词，清晰表达对天气的喜好及原因。

例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin and mouth feel very dry.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议用正确的时态和句型说明习惯，并解释原因。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because if the weather is good, we have PE class, which I don't like very much.

提案: 回答未能有效表达观点，缺乏内容和连贯性。建议学习相关词汇和句型，尝试表达简单的看法。

例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather, like hotter summers and colder winters.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用正确时态和词汇，清晰表达愿望和原因。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because my country is very cold and I want to experience some sunshine.

× In my life, the weather was sung.

✓ In my life, the weather was sunny.

这里'sung'是错误的过去式形式，正确的形容词应该是'sunny'，表示晴朗的天气。学生混淆了动词的过去式和形容词的用法。

× I like hot weather because hot weather I can eat ice cream and gold.

✓ I like hot weather because I can eat ice cream and go swimming.

句子结构混乱，'gold'应为'go'，且句子缺少主语和谓语的正确顺序。需要调整语序并纠正拼写错误。

× Swimming in cold weather, I think it's no good.

✓ I think swimming in cold weather is not good.

原句结构不完整，主语和谓语位置不当，导致表达不清晰。应调整为完整句子。

× Cold weather was very cold.

✓ The cold weather was very cold.

缺少定冠词'the'，且句子重复使用'cold'形容词，虽然语法上无大错，但加上定冠词更符合英语习惯。

× I like wet weather because dried weather My face and my mouth are dried too, but white weather I didn't think dried.

✓ I like wet weather because in dry weather my face and mouth get dry too, but in white weather I don't think it's dry.

形容词使用错误，'dried'应为'dry'，且句子缺少连词和介词，导致表达不清晰。

× Yeah, I check in the weather every day because in my school, if the weather was good, we must go to the PE class.

✓ Yeah, I check the weather every day because at my school, if the weather is good, we must go to PE class.

介词使用错误，'check in the weather'应为'check the weather'，'in my school'应为'at my school'，时态也需调整。

× I don't like PE and wrong, so I check in the weather every day.

✓ I don't like PE and being wrong, so I check the weather every day.

句子结构不完整，'wrong'用法错误，应改为'being wrong'或重新表达。

× I think the weather changed was very big change because.

✓ I think the weather has changed a lot recently.

时态使用错误，'changed was'不正确，应使用现在完成时表达最近的变化。

× Yes, I wanted to visit other cities that have different weather for my life because in my country the weather was very cold and very sung, so I wanted to go some sun.

✓ Yes, I want to visit other cities that have different weather from where I live because in my country the weather is very cold and very sunny, so I want to go somewhere sunny.

时态错误，'wanted'应为一般现在时'want'，'sung'应为'sunny'，'go some sun'表达不正确，应为'go somewhere sunny'。