Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'near the center of the earth', say 'near the equator'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

例: I live in Thailand, which is near the equator, so the weather is usually hot throughout the year.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Avoid unclear expressions like 'prefer cold weather down'. Also, provide a reason using linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I prefer cold weather because working in hot weather can be frustrating and uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid unrelated terms like 'thermodynamic'. Use simple, clear language and explain your preference with specific reasons and linking words.

例: I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable. Wet weather is humid, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer is generally good but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use complete sentences and appropriate linking words. Also, clarify your reasons more precisely.

例: I usually check the weather forecast in the mornings so that I can prepare an umbrella if it's going to rain or wear UV-protective clothing if it's sunny.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using linking words and specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect vocabulary.

例: Climate change has affected our planet recently. For example, unusual cold weather occurs less often, and Thailand is now experiencing more frequent droughts.

提案: Your answer has several unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Of course, I would love to visit countries with different climates from mine. I usually travel to cooler places every year to enjoy the pleasant weather.

× Where I live is hot.

✓ The place where I live is hot.

The sentence lacks a clear subject with 'there is/are' structure or a proper noun phrase. 'Where I live is hot' is awkward; better to say 'The place where I live is hot' to clarify the subject.

× we usually have just a hot weather all the year.

✓ we usually have just hot weather all year round.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'all the year' should be 'all year round' for natural expression.

× I prefer cold weather down.

✓ I prefer cold weather.

'Down' is unnecessary and incorrect here; the phrase 'prefer cold weather' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× Imagine if you have to work in a hot weather.

✓ Imagine if you have to work in hot weather.

'Weather' is uncountable and does not take the article 'a'.

× You can more feel frustrated when the weather is not nice.

✓ You can feel more frustrated when the weather is not nice.

The adverb 'more' should be placed before the adjective 'frustrated' and after the verb 'feel' to maintain correct word order.

× I usually be prefer dive by thermodynamic because I feel more comfortable in the dry weather.

✓ I usually prefer dry weather because I feel more comfortable in it.

'Be prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' is a stative verb and does not use 'be'. 'Dive by thermodynamic' is unclear and likely a mistranslation; replaced with 'dry weather' for clarity.

× If in the wet it feel more humid and you're not feel comfortable with your body temperature.

✓ If it is wet, it feels more humid and you don't feel comfortable with your body temperature.

Missing subject 'it' and auxiliary verbs 'is' and 'don't' are needed for correct tense and agreement. 'You're not feel' is incorrect; should be 'you don't feel'.

× Would love to check the weather.

✓ I would love to check the weather.

The subject 'I' is missing before the modal verb 'would'.

× I usually check in the mornings because I can prepare myself with the umbrella with a rainy day and with the UV protected shows if the day is sunny.

✓ I usually check in the mornings because I can prepare myself with an umbrella on a rainy day and with UV-protected shoes if the day is sunny.

Use 'an umbrella' (indefinite article), 'on a rainy day' (correct preposition), and 'UV-protected shoes' (correct noun and adjective). 'Shows' is a typo for 'shoes'.

× Yes, the climation in recent year is affect our planet right now these days like is as a cold weather, but is not happening much and now we are facing the third a few first in Thailand.

✓ Yes, the climate in recent years has affected our planet. These days, there is some cold weather, but it is not happening much. Now we are facing the third wave of frost in Thailand.

Corrected tense to present perfect 'has affected' for recent impact, fixed noun 'climate', plural 'years', and clarified meaning with proper sentence structure.

× Of course, I would love to visit the country that has different kindness from my country.

✓ Of course, I would love to visit countries that have different climates from my country.

'Kindness' is incorrect; likely meant 'climates'. Also, 'countries' plural fits better with 'different climates'.

× I usually visit those kind of tea every year to just enjoy the nice weather, the pairs that colder than time.

✓ I usually visit those kinds of places every year just to enjoy the nice weather, the places that are colder than here.

'Kind of tea' is incorrect; likely meant 'kinds of places'. 'Pairs' is a typo for 'places'. 'Colder than time' is incorrect; replaced with 'colder than here' for clarity.