Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a more direct and concise answer to the question about the weather, focusing on the weather conditions rather than locations. Avoid hesitation and redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: The weather in Slovenia is generally mild and serene, with beautiful trees surrounding the mountains like Asmur. It is often pleasant enough to enjoy picnics outdoors.

提案: Provide a clear and grammatically correct response. Use linking words to connect your preferences and reasons, and avoid hesitation. Be specific about why you prefer hot weather and mention the season you like clearly.

例: I prefer hot weather because I don't feel comfortable in the cold. Spring is my favourite season since the weather is warm and the environment is beautiful.

提案: Focus on clear pronunciation and avoid filler words. Structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be specific about why you like wet weather and describe the effect it has on you.

例: I prefer wet weather because the rain makes the trees look beautiful and it cheers me up. For example, I enjoy watching the serene rain in the lovely places around me.

提案: Answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid unnecessary hesitation and repetition. Use linking words to explain when and why you check the weather forecast, and keep your answer concise.

例: I usually check the weather forecast for the next two days because I need to plan my work and walks. Also, I enjoy watching the sunset when the weather is nice.

提案: Provide a more structured and grammatically correct answer. Use linking words to explain the causes and effects of climate change clearly. Be specific about the impact of pollution and companies' roles.

例: Many companies contribute to pollution because they lack proper filters, which makes the air unclear. As a result, climate change has worsened in recent years.

提案: Give a clear and complete answer with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your preferences and reasons for wanting to visit places with different climates. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I would love to visit other countries, especially those with spring-like weather. I enjoy the green trees and beautiful mountains when the sun is high in the sky.

× I'm living in Slovenia.

✓ I live in Slovenia.

The present continuous tense 'I'm living' is used for temporary actions or situations. Since living in a place is generally a permanent state, the simple present tense 'I live' is more appropriate.

× there is a lot of trees

✓ there are a lot of trees

The phrase 'a lot of trees' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I'm the one who are not, uh, good.

✓ I'm the one who is not, uh, good.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'one' which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'.

× some are on some on the springs, uh, most beautiful, uh, season that I love and I want to live in that moment.

✓ Spring is the most beautiful season that I love and I want to live in that moment.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrasing it to 'Spring is the most beautiful season that I love and I want to live in that moment' clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× when I watching them

✓ when I watch them

After 'when', the simple present tense 'watch' is used to describe habitual actions. 'Watching' is incorrect here.

× there is a lot of beautiful uh, places around me.

✓ there are a lot of beautiful uh, places around me.

'Places' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× in, uh, my walking

✓ when I am walking

The phrase 'in my walking' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'when I am walking' to indicate the time during the action.

× I should check the weather cars and, uh, forecast

✓ I should check the weather charts and, uh, forecast

The word 'cars' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse. The correct word is 'charts' when referring to weather information.

× There is a lot of companies and make the weather's pollution and not clear.

✓ There are a lot of companies that cause pollution and make the weather unclear.

'Companies' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, the sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× There is a lot of company that they don't have a filter for people and for the weather.

✓ There are a lot of companies that don't have filters for people and for the environment.

'Company' should be plural 'companies' to match 'a lot of'. The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and can be omitted. Also, 'filters' is plural to match 'companies'.

× That's why the climate change is going to be so bad and.

✓ That's why climate change is going to get so bad.

The phrase is incomplete and awkward. 'Is going to get so bad' is a clearer future tense expression. Also, 'climate change' does not need 'the'.

× especially those countries who are, uh, living in spring

✓ especially those countries that have spring

Countries do not 'live' in a season. The correct expression is 'have spring'. Also, 'that' is preferred for countries instead of 'who'.

× when the sun are in the middle on the sky.

✓ when the sun is in the middle of the sky.

The subject 'sun' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, the preposition 'of' is correct instead of 'on'.