Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сосредоточьтесь на ясной и грамматически правильной теме и избегайте лишней информации. Начните с простого, точного общего утверждения о погоде в вашем регионе, затем добавьте одно конкретное примечание и завершите одним предложением о ваших предпочтениях. Используйте связки (for example, usually, when) и правильные формы глаголов и существительных.

例: The weather where I live is quite changeable. For example, it often rains in spring, but summers are usually warm. When the weather is warm, I like going outside to play football with my friends.

提案: Используйте простое прямое заявление о предпочтении, объясните причину в одном–двух предложениях и избегайте повтора слов. Следите за формами глаголов (I like to play / I go to a café) и временем (we have a good time).

例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy playing in the snow. I also like visiting cafés with friends, where we drink coffee or tea and relax.

提案: Давайте прямой ответ, затем одну чёткую причину с корректной грамматикой и связкой (because, so). Избегайте лишних деталей и неправильных форм (The Walking, see when I weather rainy).

例: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy walking in the rain. After a walk I like returning home and watching the rain from my window.

提案: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос (да/нет), затем укажите, когда и как часто вы проверяете, используя точные фразы (on my phone, every morning). Избегайте повтора и неясных выражений (say check, see see).

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone every morning. I also look again before going out if the sky looks cloudy.

提案: Дайте ясное мнение о последствиях изменения климата, приведите 1–2 конкретных примера (например, более частые наводнения, тёплые зимы) и используйте связки (for example, because, as a result). Избегайте неуместных личных комментариев и некорректной грамматики.

例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather recently. For example, winters are warmer than before and there are more heavy rains, which can lead to flooding in some areas.

提案: Начните с чёткого «Yes» или «No», затем приведите конкретный пример места и причину, используя правильную грамматику и связки (for example, because). Уточняйте детали кратко и естественно (take photos of beautiful places).

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as Istanbul. It can be rainy or warm there, but it is often sunny, and I prefer sunny weather because I can go out and take photos of many beautiful places.

× In my country different weather, for example rain sometimes rainy, sometimes warm, but usually in my country bottom.

✓ The weather in my country is varied; for example, sometimes it rains and it's rainy, sometimes it's warm, but usually the weather is mild.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verbs. Use a clear subject and verb ('The weather ... is varied'), and parallel structure for examples. Replace 'bottom' (incorrect word) with 'mild' or another appropriate adjective. В предложении отсутствует глагол и нарушён порядок слов; нужно использовать подлежащее и сказуемое и согласованную структуру.

× In warm weather I prefer going outside and play with my friends football.

✓ In warm weather I prefer going outside and playing football with my friends.

After 'prefer' when contrasting activities, use the -ing form for both verbs: 'going' and 'playing'. Also place the object 'football' after 'playing' and 'with my friends' after the activity. После 'prefer' при перечислении действий следует использовать форму глагола с -ing; также нужно правильное расположение дополнений.

× I prefer prefer cold weather because I like play snow in cold weather and I go to cafe with my friends.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I like playing in the snow in cold weather and I go to a cafe with my friends.

Remove duplicate 'prefer'. After 'like' use the -ing form 'playing'. Use the article 'a' before 'cafe'. В тексте лишнее повторение слова, после 'like' требуется форма с -ing, перед существительным 'cafe' нужен неопределённый артикль.

× We drink drink coffee or tea and we had a good time.

✓ We drink coffee or tea and have a good time.

Avoid repetition 'drink'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'drink' and 'have'. The original mixes present and past ('had') incorrectly. Оригинал содержит повтор и несогласованность времен; для описания привычек используйте Present Simple.

× I prefer wet weather because I like walking outside, it's very comfortable and after The Walking I go my home and see the window and see when I weather rainy.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I like walking outside; it's very comfortable, and after walking I go home and look out the window to see when the weather is rainy.

Use consistent lowercase and forms: 'walking' not 'The Walking'. Use 'go home' (no 'my') and 'look out the window' to check the weather. 'When the weather is rainy' is the correct clause. Нужны корректные фразы и порядок слов: 'go home' без притяжательного местоимения, 'look out the window' и согласованное придаточное 'when the weather is rainy'.

× Yes I am. I always say check the weather by my phone.

✓ Yes, I do. I always check the weather on my phone.

Answer to 'Are you in the habit...' should be 'Yes, I do.' 'Check the weather on my phone' uses correct preposition 'on' and removes misplaced verb 'say'. 'I am' is unnatural here. Ответ на вопрос о привычке требует 'do', а предлог для телефона — 'on'.

× It's very comfortable and easy. I prefer using my phone when I see see whether it's very comfortable and easy.

✓ It's very convenient and easy. I prefer using my phone when I check whether it's accurate or not.

Avoid repetition 'see see'. 'Comfortable' is odd for features of a phone; 'convenient' fits better. Use 'check whether it's accurate' instead of 'see whether it's very comfortable and easy'. Исправлены повторения и подобрано более подходящее слово 'convenient'; также уточнено действие 'check whether it's accurate'.

× Exactly, my chair change I I see the window and see the climate is change.

✓ Recently, I have noticed changes in the climate when I look out of the window.

Original is ungrammatical and redundant ('my chair change' makes no sense). Use present perfect 'have noticed' for recent changes and correct phrase 'look out of the window'. Оригинал бессмысличен и содержит повторы; нужна связная фраза с Present Perfect для недавних изменений климата.

× I prefer staying at home and drink coffee or tea because it's comfortable and cheap.

✓ I prefer staying at home and drinking coffee or tea because it's comfortable and inexpensive.

After 'prefer' use -ing form 'drinking'. Use 'inexpensive' or 'cheap' consistently; 'cheap' is acceptable but 'inexpensive' is more formal. После 'prefer' требуется форма с -ing; слово 'cheap' можно заменить на 'inexpensive' для формальности.

× I like the climate.

✓ I like the climate here.

Add 'here' to clarify which climate is meant, improving coherence with the previous sentence. Предложению не хватает уточнения; добавление 'here' делает мысль яснее.

× The yes, I would like to visit the other cities, for example Istanbul, where the weather is different.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities, for example Istanbul, where the weather is different.

Remove extra 'The'. Use 'other cities' without 'the' for general statement. Удалено лишнее слово и исправлено употребление артикля для общего утверждения.

× In Istanbul sometimes rainy, sometimes warm and you usually the weather is sunny.

✓ In Istanbul it's sometimes rainy, sometimes warm, but usually the weather is sunny.

Add the contraction 'it's' to include a verb, use conjunction 'but' to contrast, and place article 'the' before 'weather'. Вставлен глагол и союзы для логической связи предложений; добавлен артикль перед 'weather'.

× I prefer sunny weather because I go outside and take the photos many beautiful places.

✓ I prefer sunny weather because I go outside and take photos of many beautiful places.

Use 'take photos of' rather than 'take the photos many beautiful places'. Remove unnecessary 'the' and reorder words for natural English. После 'take photos of' требуется предлог 'of' и правильный порядок слов; убрать лишний артикль.