Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为冗长且表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: I usually eat snacks in the dormitory after finishing all my classes for the day. I often share snacks with my best friends and we enjoy trying each other's treats.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议注意时态和单复数，避免重复词汇，并用更准确的词汇表达健康问题。

例: Although I enjoy eating snacks at night in the dormitory, I know it's not very healthy because our stomachs have difficulty digesting food late at night, which can cause stomach problems.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I used to eat snacks at home when I was young, but my parents controlled how many I could eat, especially at night. Now that I live at university, I have more freedom and find it hard to resist eating snacks at night.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达喜好和原因。

例: I like eating chips and cookies the most because they taste great and satisfy my hunger. I usually buy plenty of them in the dormitory and share them with my best friends.

× Well, though I like eat snake, I like eating snakes at dormitories at night, but I think that's not very healthy for us to eat them.

✓ Well, though I like eating snacks, I like eating snacks at dormitories at night, but I think that's not very healthy for us to eat them.

动词like后面应该接动名词形式（-ing），而不是动词原形。这里应使用"like eating"而不是"like eat"。

× Well, though I like eat snake, I like eating snakes at dormitories at night, but I think that's not very healthy for us to eat them.

✓ Well, though I like eating snacks, I like eating snacks at dormitories at night, but I think that's not very healthy for us to eat them.

单词"snake"意思是蛇，语境中应指零食，正确单词是"snacks"，且应使用复数形式。

× That's because my parents always control me and do not allow me, do not allow me to eat too many snakes, especially at night.

✓ That's because my parents always control me and do not allow me to eat too many snacks, especially at night.

"snakes"是蛇的复数，语境应为零食，正确单词是"snacks"，且应使用复数形式。

× But now, however, I live in the universities and no one can control me anymore, so I it was hard for me to resist eating snakes at night.

✓ But now, however, I live in the university and no one can control me anymore, so it is hard for me to resist eating snacks at night.

"universities"复数形式不符合语境，通常指一所大学，使用单数"university"。另外，"snakes"应为"snacks"。

× But now, however, I live in the universities and no one can control me anymore, so I it was hard for me to resist eating snakes at night.

✓ But now, however, I live in the university and no one can control me anymore, so it is hard for me to resist eating snacks at night.

句子中"it was hard"时态与前后文不符，描述现在情况应使用一般现在时"it is hard"。

× Well, among those very snakes, chips and cookies are two things that I like eating the best.

✓ Well, among those snacks, chips and cookies are two things that I like eating the best.

"snakes"应为"snacks"，表示零食，且为复数形式。

× That's because they they're tasty flavor suit suit me very well and I like eating them especially I feel hungry.

✓ That's because their tasty flavor suits me very well and I like eating them especially when I feel hungry.

"they they're"重复错误，应为"their"表示所有格；"suit suit"重复，应为"suits"，主语为单数"flavor"，动词需加-s；缺少连词"when"连接句子。

× And also I contend I bought plenty of cookies and chips in my dormitories and I always share them with my best friends.

✓ And also I think I bought plenty of cookies and chips in my dormitory and I always share them with my best friends.

"contend"用法不当，表达想法应使用"think"；"dormitories"复数不符合语境，通常指一间宿舍，使用单数"dormitory"。