Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然，但有些重复和语法不够准确。建议避免重复表达，简洁明了地回答问题，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: I don't eat snacks very often. However, I sometimes have a snack after exercising or while studying to boost my energy.

提案: 回答内容具体且有条理，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意单复数一致。

例: Some snacks can be unhealthy, especially those high in sugar or fat. However, I enjoy healthy snacks like homemade oat biscuits because they are nutritious and filling. Therefore, eating these snacks occasionally helps me maintain a balanced diet.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（如'snacks was'应为'snacks were'），建议注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免不必要的重复。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was a child. For instance, I frequently had biscuits or fruit between meals because they were convenient and tasty. Snacks were very appealing to me, especially at school.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并避免口语填充词。

例: Recently, I have enjoyed eating dark chocolate because it has a rich flavor. I often eat it while studying as it helps me concentrate better, and sometimes after exercising.

× Eating this kind of snacks occasionally helps me maintain a balanced diet.

✓ Eating this kind of snack occasionally helps me maintain a balanced diet.

“this kind of”后面应接不可数名词或单数名词，表示“一种……”，所以“snacks”应改为单数形式“snack”。

× Snacks was so appealing to a child and especially in school.

✓ Snacks were so appealing to a child and especially in school.

“Snacks”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“were”，而不是单数“was”。

× I often eat it when I was studying because it can make me concentrated better and also maybe after exercising.

✓ I often ate it when I was studying because it can make me concentrate better and also maybe after exercising.

句中描述过去的习惯动作，应使用过去时“ate”而非现在时“eat”。此外，“make me concentrated better”中“concentrated”应为动词原形“concentrate”，因为“make”后接动词需用原形。