Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answers clearer and more structured. Avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I usually eat snacks when I have free time. For example, I like to eat snacks while watching movies. Also, when I am on the bus and feel bored, I eat snacks to pass the time.

提案: Try to organize your answer with clear reasons and avoid repeating the same ideas. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain your opinion clearly in English (Cambodia).

例: I think eating snacks is not healthy for me because they have a lot of calories. As a result, eating too many snacks can make me gain weight and harm my health.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to use past tense correctly and avoid repeating the same information. Also, make your sentences clear and complete.

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because my grandma owned a snack shop. She gave me snacks every day.

提案: Try to give a clear and complete answer in English (Cambodia). Avoid repeating words and explain your choice with reasons or details.

例: I don't have a favorite snack, but I usually eat cheap tomatoes. I like them because my grandma sells them in her shop.

× In my free time I watching movies include eating snacks and Oh yeah so when I'm on the bus I'm also eat snack because I feel bored.

✓ In my free time I watch movies including eating snacks and oh yeah, so when I'm on the bus I also eat snacks because I feel bored.

The verb 'watching' is incorrectly used after 'I' without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I watch'. Also, 'include' should be 'including' to correctly link the activities. 'Eat snack' should be 'eat snacks' to match plural form. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That's why I eat snack and watch movie on the bus.

✓ That's why I eat snacks and watch movies on the bus.

The nouns 'snack' and 'movie' should be plural ('snacks' and 'movies') to match the context of habitual actions. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch and improves sentence accuracy.

× I think it's not healthy for me to eat snacks because like snacks have a lot of calories and makes my health really bad and I will get fat when I eat snacks and sometimes it's like have a bad healthy yes it's not good.

✓ I think it's not healthy for me to eat snacks because snacks have a lot of calories and make my health really bad. I will get fat when I eat snacks and sometimes it can cause bad health. Yes, it's not good.

The sentence has pronoun and verb agreement issues. 'Like' is unnecessary and confusing here. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'snacks'. 'It's like have a bad healthy' is incorrect; it should be 'it can cause bad health'. These corrections clarify meaning and fix grammatical errors.

× Yes, when I was young I eat snacks every day because my grandma is a snack seller.

✓ Yes, when I was young I ate snacks every day because my grandma was a snack seller.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was young'. Also, 'is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. This ensures correct tense usage.

× Yes ** *** has her own business that ** *** sell a snack and she give it to me every day she gave it.

✓ Yes, she had her own business that sold snacks and she gave them to me every day.

Pronouns '** ***' are unclear and should be replaced with 'she'. Verb tenses 'sell' and 'give' should be past tense 'sold' and 'gave' to match past context. 'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match meaning. This correction clarifies pronoun use and verb tense.

× I don't have, I don't have my favorite snacks, but snack that I usually eat, it's maybe cheap tomato.

✓ I don't have a favorite snack, but the snack that I usually eat is maybe cheap tomatoes.

'Snacks' should be singular 'snack' when referring to a favorite item. 'Snack' should be preceded by an article 'a'. 'Tomato' should be plural 'tomatoes' to indicate the type of snack. This corrects singular/plural and article usage.

× That's my favorite snack because my grandma's have it in her shop.

✓ That's my favorite snack because my grandma has it in her shop.

'Grandma's' is possessive and incorrectly used here; it should be 'grandma' as the subject. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'grandma'. This fixes pronoun and subject-verb agreement errors.