Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý đến việc sử dụng số nhiều và số ít (ví dụ: 'snack' nên là 'snacks'). Ngoài ra, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'intact' thay vì 'intake'. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon when I feel a bit hungry between meals. However, I try to limit my snack intake because eating too many unhealthy snacks can lead to weight gain. Therefore, I prefer healthy options like fruits or nuts.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'vitamin fibers' và 'have sacrifice your hunger'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu trả lời cần hoàn chỉnh hơn để tránh gây hiểu nhầm. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy if you choose the right ones. For instance, fruits and nuts are nutritious because they contain vitamins, fiber, and healthy fats, which help satisfy hunger without adding too much sugar. Eating these kinds of snacks is a good way to maintain energy between meals.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, số nhiều và cách dùng từ (ví dụ: 'snack' nên là 'snacks', 'curious' cần thêm 'was' hoặc 'am'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, when I was young, I used to love eating snacks between meals. For example, I enjoyed candies, chips, and other treats. I was always curious to explore the fridge and try new snacks.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời tốt về nội dung nhưng cần chú ý đến số nhiều và từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: 'Berry' nên là 'berries', 'antecedents' không phù hợp, nên dùng 'antioxidants'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài, bạn nên chia câu và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: Recently, I have been enjoying more nutritious snacks such as fruits and nuts. For example, I often eat macadamia nuts and various berries like blueberries, strawberries, and bananas. These snacks are packed with vitamins and antioxidants, which boost my energy and keep me healthy throughout the day.

× Nowadays, I usually eat snack in the afternoon, uh, when I feel a bit hungry between meals.

✓ Nowadays, I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, uh, when I feel a bit hungry between meals.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to multiple instances of eating small amounts of food. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to more than one or a general habit.

× However, I try to limit my snack intact because consuming too many unhealthy snacks can lead to weight gain.

✓ However, I try to limit my snacks intake because consuming too many unhealthy snacks can lead to weight gain.

The phrase 'snack intact' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'snacks intake' where 'snacks' is plural to match 'intake' of multiple snacks. Also, 'intake' is the correct noun to describe consumption amount.

× For example, I prefer having fruits or nuts.

✓ For example, I prefer having fruit or nuts.

The word 'fruits' is usually uncountable when referring to fruit in general as food, so 'fruit' is preferred here. 'Nuts' remains plural as it is countable.

× Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy if you choose the right ones. For example, fruits and nuts are a nutritious option because they contain vitamin fibers, healthy fats but have sacrifice your hunger without adding too much sugar.

✓ Yes, I think eating snacks can be healthy if you choose the right ones. For example, fruit and nuts are nutritious options because they contain vitamins, fiber, healthy fats and can satisfy your hunger without adding too much sugar.

'Fruits' should be 'fruit' as an uncountable noun here. 'Vitamin fibers' is incorrect; it should be 'vitamins' and 'fiber' as separate nouns. 'Have sacrifice your hunger' is incorrect; it should be 'can satisfy your hunger'. Also, 'a nutritious option' should be plural 'nutritious options' to match 'fruit and nuts'.

× Eating these kind of snacks can be a good way to maintain energy between.

✓ Eating these kinds of snacks can be a good way to maintain energy between meals.

The phrase 'these kind of snacks' should be 'these kinds of snacks' because 'these' is plural and must match with plural 'kinds'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without 'meals' after 'between'.

× Yes, that's definitely when I was young I used to love eating snack between meal.

✓ Yes, that's definitely true. When I was young, I used to love eating snacks between meals.

'Eating snack' should be 'eating snacks' to indicate plural. 'Between meal' should be 'between meals' as it refers to the time between multiple meals.

× So for example I would love to eat candies, chips and snack.

✓ So for example, I would love to eat candies, chips and snacks.

'Snack' should be plural 'snacks' to match the list of multiple items.

× I often enjoy having them because I always curious to explore the fridge and try new treats.

✓ I often enjoy having them because I am always curious to explore the fridge and try new treats.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'always curious' to form the correct present tense structure 'I am always curious'.

× Recently, I have been enjoying more nutritious snacks such as fruit and nuts.

✓ Recently, I have been enjoying more nutritious snacks such as fruit and nuts.

This sentence is correct. No correction needed.

× For example, I often eat maca nuts and various Berry like blueberries, strawberry, bananas and these snacks are packed with vitamins and antecedents which have boost my energy and keep me healthy throughout the day.

✓ For example, I often eat maca nuts and various berries like blueberries, strawberries, bananas, and these snacks are packed with vitamins and antioxidants which have boosted my energy and keep me healthy throughout the day.

'Berry' should be plural 'berries' to match 'various'. 'Strawberry' should be plural 'strawberries' to match the list. 'Antecedents' is incorrect; the correct word is 'antioxidants'. 'Have boost' should be 'have boosted' to use the correct past participle form.

× ...which have boost my energy and keep me healthy throughout the day.

✓ ...which have boosted my energy and keep me healthy throughout the day.

'Boost' should be in the past participle form 'boosted' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense.