Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit short and could be more natural by adding linking words and more specific details. Try to avoid redundancy and make your response more coherent by connecting ideas smoothly.

例: I usually avoid eating snacks because I'm trying to lose weight. However, I do eat fruits during lunchtime as a healthy alternative, which helps me stay full until dinner.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to contrast ideas clearly. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' to sound more natural.

例: It depends on the type of snacks you eat. For example, sweet snacks like chocolate or cookies are not healthy, but nuts can be a healthy choice because they contain good fats and nutrients.

提案: Your answer is too brief and includes filler words. Try to expand your response with more specific details and use linking words to make it more fluent and natural.

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. Most of the time, I enjoyed chocolate, cookies, and sometimes chips, especially after school or during weekends.

提案: Your answer is very short and contains a grammatical error. Try to provide a complete sentence with supporting details and avoid simple statements to make your answer more engaging and natural.

例: My favorite snack is chocolate because I love its sweet taste and it gives me a quick energy boost during the day.

× Depends what kind of snacks do you eat?

✓ It depends on what kind of snacks you eat.

The original sentence is a fragment and incorrectly structured as a question. It lacks a subject and verb to form a complete sentence. Adding 'It' as the subject and restructuring the sentence to a statement corrects the sentence structure.

× It's if it's uh sweet.

✓ If it's sweet, then it's not healthy.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly uses 'It's if'. A proper conditional sentence with 'If' at the beginning and a clear main clause improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So like chocolate or cookies.

✓ For example, chocolate or cookies.

The phrase 'So like' is informal and incomplete. Replacing it with 'For example' provides a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× Uh, but if you eat let's say nuts, it's would be healthy.

✓ But if you eat, let's say, nuts, it would be healthy.

The phrase 'it's would be' is incorrect; 'it would be' is the correct modal verb construction. Also, commas are added for clarity around 'let's say'.

× My favorite snacks is chocolate.

✓ My favorite snack is chocolate.

The subject 'snacks' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, causing disagreement. Changing 'snacks' to singular 'snack' matches the singular verb 'is' and fits the context of a single favorite item.