Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually avoid eating snacks because I am on a diet. However, I allow myself to eat snacks on my cheat day, which is usually once a week.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cung cấp lý do cụ thể để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because most snacks contain a lot of unhealthy ingredients and high fat, which can harm my health.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và số ít số nhiều. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và có thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: Definitely, I used to love snacks when I was younger. I ate them every day and often asked for snacks whenever I saw them.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

例: Currently, I prefer healthy snacks like light vegetable and herb-based snacks. However, when I was younger, I was crazy about traditional Vietnamese snacks like bimbim.

× Well, actually I'm cuttings down on eating snacks because, uh, I'm go on a diet so I don't actually it's like, but if I it's Nike, it will be the day my on my cheat day.

✓ Well, actually I'm cutting down on eating snacks because, uh, I'm going on a diet so I don't actually eat them, but if I do, it's like my cheat day.

The verb 'cuttings' is incorrect; the correct form is 'cutting' (present participle) after 'I'm'. Also, 'I'm go' should be 'I'm going' to form the present continuous tense. The phrase 'I don't actually it's like' is unclear and corrected to 'I don't actually eat them'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, actually I'm cuttings down on eating snacks because, uh, I'm go on a diet so I don't actually it's like, but if I it's Nike, it will be the day my on my cheat day.

✓ Well, actually I'm cutting down on eating snacks because, uh, I'm going on a diet so I don't actually eat them, but if I do, it's like my cheat day.

The pronoun usage 'it's like' and 'if I it's Nike' is incorrect and unclear. It is corrected to 'if I do, it's like my cheat day' to properly refer to eating snacks on cheat days.

× No, is will never never be healthy for my my health because snack has a lot of like unhealthy umm things, isn't it? And there are a lot of fat food.

✓ No, it will never be healthy for my health because snacks have a lot of unhealthy things, don't they? And there is a lot of fatty food.

'Is will' is incorrect; it should be 'it will'. 'Snack has' should be plural 'snacks have' to agree with plural subject. 'Isn't it?' is corrected to 'don't they?' to agree with plural 'snacks'. 'Fat food' is corrected to 'fatty food' to use the correct adjective form.

× Definitely I did. When I were younger. I were a snack lover and you know what? I were eating snack every single day. And like I asked for snack for eating, snack every time I see it.

✓ Definitely I did. When I was younger, I was a snack lover and you know what? I ate snacks every single day. And I asked for snacks to eat every time I saw them.

The verb 'were' is incorrectly used with the singular subject 'I'; it should be 'was'. 'I were eating snack' is corrected to 'I ate snacks' to use simple past tense. 'I asked for snack for eating, snack' is corrected to 'I asked for snacks to eat' for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Every time I see it' is corrected to 'every time I saw them' to maintain past tense and plural agreement.

× Definitely I did. When I were younger. I were a snack lover and you know what? I were eating snack every single day. And like I asked for snack for eating, snack every time I see it.

✓ Definitely I did. When I was younger, I was a snack lover and you know what? I ate snacks every single day. And I asked for snacks to eat every time I saw them.

Pronouns and verb forms are corrected to agree in number and tense. 'Snack' is pluralized to 'snacks' to match the context. 'It' is changed to 'them' to refer correctly to plural 'snacks'.

× Well for now and before healthy snack like light snack with vegetable and herbs. But back back to when I was younger I was crazy about snack like being being recalled bimbing Vietnam.

✓ Well, for now and before, I like healthy snacks like light snacks with vegetables and herbs. But back when I was younger, I was crazy about snacks like being recalled bimbing Vietnam.

'Healthy snack' and 'light snack' are pluralized to 'healthy snacks' and 'light snacks' to match the context. 'Vegetable' is pluralized to 'vegetables'. The phrase 'being being recalled bimbing Vietnam' is unclear and kept as is due to lack of context but repeated words are corrected to single instances. The sentence is restructured for clarity.