Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda ifadələr qarışıqdır və mövzuya uyğun olmayan sözlər var. Daha aydın və mövzuya uyğun ifadələr istifadə edin, məsələn, niyə gecə qəlyanaltı yediyinizi və hansı qəlyanaltıları seçdiyinizi izah edin.

例: I usually eat snacks at night while watching Master Chef because it makes the experience more enjoyable. My favorite snacks are popcorn and nuts because they are tasty and easy to eat.

提案: Cavabınızda mövzuya uyğun olmayan ifadələr var və fikriniz aydın deyil. Sağlamlıq mövzusunda fikrinizi daha aydın və konkret ifadə edin, əlavə olaraq səbəblər verin.

例: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar and fat. Therefore, I try to avoid them or choose healthier options like fruits.

提案: Cavabınız qarışıqdır və mövzu ilə əlaqəsiz ifadələr var. Keçmişdə qəlyanaltı yemək vərdişləriniz barədə aydın və sadə cümlələrlə danışın.

例: When I was young, I often ate snacks like chips and cookies. However, my mother told me not to eat too many because they are not healthy.

提案: Cavabınız mənasızdır və mövzuya uyğun deyil. Sevdiyiniz qəlyanaltıları aydın şəkildə qeyd edin və onları niyə sevdiyinizi izah edin.

例: My favorite snacks are chocolate and fruit. I like chocolate because it tastes sweet, and fruit because it is healthy and refreshing.

× Usually I eat snack nights because I watch Master Chef and it's really good together.

✓ Usually I eat snacks at night because I watch Master Chef and it's really good together.

The word 'snack' should be plural 'snacks' because it refers to multiple instances of eating snacks. Also, 'nights' should be 'at night' to indicate the time when the action happens.

× Usually I eat snack nights because I watch Master Chef and it's really good together.

✓ Usually I eat snacks at night because I watch Master Chef and it's really good together.

The preposition 'at' is used to indicate specific times like 'at night'. Using 'nights' without a preposition is incorrect in this context.

× I love mayhem.

✓ I love mayhem.

This sentence is unclear and seems unrelated to the context. Possibly a mispronunciation or error, but grammatically it is a complete sentence. No correction applied.

× I don't think that is healthy for my health Ness so I don't usually prefer eating snacks but I usually eat snacks and I love my wife.

✓ I don't think that is healthy for my health, so I don't usually prefer eating snacks, but I usually eat snacks and I love my wife.

The word 'health Ness' is incorrect; it should be 'health'. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity. The sentence is somewhat contradictory but grammatically corrected here.

× I'm already young as a plus room. I, I I like eating snacks, but my mom said don't eat. It's not like it's not healthy for yourself. And I said my mom, I love my wife.

✓ I was young when I lived in a dormitory. I like eating snacks, but my mom said don't eat them because they are not healthy for you. And I told my mom, I love my wife.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. 'Plus room' likely means 'dormitory'. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× What snacks do you like to eat? Student: I usually eat my life and that's my favorite snack.

✓ I usually eat lychee and that's my favorite snack.

'My life' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'lychee', a type of snack. Corrected to a proper noun for clarity. Also, 'snack' is singular here as it refers to one favorite snack.