Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and keep your sentences concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'especially when I feel hungry between the meals, so I eat snacks', you could say 'particularly when I feel hungry between meals, as snacks provide a quick energy boost.'

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, particularly when I feel hungry between meals, as snacks provide a quick energy boost.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by avoiding filler words and using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to contrast ideas clearly. For example, use 'however' to contrast healthy and unhealthy snacks.

例: It depends on the snacks; fruits and nuts are healthy options. However, sugary and salty products can be unhealthy.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say 'I did not often eat snacks when I was younger because my parents were strict about healthy eating, so we usually avoided snacks.'

例: I did not often eat snacks when I was younger because my parents were strict about healthy eating, so we usually avoided snacks.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences to avoid redundancy and using linking words for coherence. For example, use 'although' to contrast preferences and 'depending on' for conditions.

例: I enjoy eating chips and biscuits, although I also prefer healthier options like fruits and nuts, depending on my mood and what's available.

× No, I don't eat often snacks when I was younger because my parents were quite strict about healthy eating so we usually don't prefer to have snacks in our diet.

✓ No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was younger because my parents were quite strict about healthy eating so we usually didn't prefer to have snacks in our diet.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't eat' with past time reference 'when I was younger'. To maintain correct tense consistency, 'don't eat' should be changed to past tense 'didn't eat' to match the past time frame. Similarly, 'don't prefer' should be 'didn't prefer' for the same reason.