Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在语法错误，如“beer always make me”应为“beer always makes me”，且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually eat snacks when I have a couple of beers because beer always makes me feel hungry, so I need to snack to avoid an empty feeling in my stomach.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“depends not on what kind of snack am I eating”应为“depends on what kind of snack I am eating”，且“brew of cod apples”表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免语法错误，并提供具体例子。

例: I think it depends on the type of snack I eat. For example, eating fresh apples is very healthy, but heavily salted chips are not good for my health.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“when I were young”应为“when I was young”，且“snack is a heavy have a heavy influence”表达不清。建议注意时态和句子结构，表达更准确清晰。

例: No, I did not eat snacks often when I was young because my parents did not allow it. Looking back, I think they were right because snacks can greatly affect my appetite.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I likes”应为“I like”，且“sneakers”用词不当，应为“snickers”或其他零食名称。建议注意单复数和词汇准确性，表达更自然。

例: I have to admit that I like snacks that are not very healthy. I enjoy chips, meat bars, and Snickers because they are high in oil, salt, and sugar, which makes me happy.

× somehow beer always make me feel hungry

✓ somehow beer always makes me feel hungry

主语是单数名词beer，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes，而不是make。

× I think it depends not on what kind of snack am I eating.

✓ I think it does not depend on what kind of snack I am eating.

句子中疑问句语序错误，应改为陈述句语序。'am I eating'应改为'I am eating'。

× if I'm eating a brew of cod apples then I think it per it's perfect for the health

✓ if I'm eating a brew of cod apples then I think it is perfect for health

句中'per it's'错误，应为'is'。此外，'for the health'中'the'不必要，应为'for health'。

× if I'm eating heavily salted chips it is not as healthy as others.

✓ if I'm eating heavily salted chips, they are not as healthy as others.

chips是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，代词也应使用they。

× No, I did not get a chance to eat snacks very often when I were young

✓ No, I did not get a chance to eat snacks very often when I was young

主语I后应使用was而不是were。

× because snack is a heavy have a heavy influence on appetite.

✓ because snacks have a heavy influence on appetite.

snack应使用复数形式snacks，谓语动词应与复数主语一致，使用have。

× I have to admit that I likes snacks that are not so healthy.

✓ I have to admit that I like snacks that are not so healthy.

主语I后动词应使用原形like，而不是likes。