Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中缺少冠词和介词，句子结构不够自然，建议使用完整的句子并注意时态和冠词的使用。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry after working for a while, so I eat something to boost my energy.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子重复“other”且表达略显简单，建议丰富词汇并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think eating snacks like nuts and fruits is healthy for me because I avoid unhealthy options such as crisps.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，句子不连贯，建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I liked sweets. For example, I used to eat sweets frequently when I was in kindergarten.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议注意主谓一致，简化句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer chocolate because I like sweet snacks. Also, since I enjoy sports, chocolate helps me feel energetic by providing some energy.

× Well I usually eat snacks afternoon because I will feel hungry after working in the afternoon so I will just eat some snacks to make me feel energetic.

✓ Well, I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry after working in the afternoon, so I just eat some snacks to make me feel energetic.

句子中缺少介词'in'，应为'in the afternoon'，且描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时，不能用将来时'will feel'和'will just eat'。

× Well I usually eat snacks afternoon because I will feel hungry after working in the afternoon so I will just eat some snacks to make me feel energetic.

✓ Well, I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry after working in the afternoon, so I just eat some snacks to make me feel energetic.

'eat snacks afternoon'缺少介词'in'，正确表达应为'eat snacks in the afternoon'。

× Yes I do because I always eat snacks such as nuts or fruits and I don't eat crisps or other other unhealthy snacks so it's healthy for me.

✓ Yes, I do because I always eat snacks such as nuts or fruits, and I don't eat crisps or other unhealthy snacks, so it's healthy for me.

句子时态正确，但缺少逗号分隔，使句子更清晰。

× Yes I did. I found that are very delicious. I and I especially preferred eating snacks when I was young because I like eating sweet. For example, I I always eat sweets when I was in kindergarten.

✓ Yes, I did. I found that they were very delicious. I especially preferred eating snacks when I was young because I liked eating sweets. For example, I always ate sweets when I was in kindergarten.

描述过去的动作和状态时，应使用过去时态，如'found','were','liked','ate'。此外，'that are'应改为'that they were'，'I like'改为'I liked'。

× Yes I did. I found that are very delicious. I and I especially preferred eating snacks when I was young because I like eating sweet. For example, I I always eat sweets when I was in kindergarten.

✓ Yes, I did. I found that they were very delicious. I especially preferred eating snacks when I was young because I liked eating sweets. For example, I always ate sweets when I was in kindergarten.

'that are'中缺少指代词，应为'that they are'，且时态应为过去时。

× Yes I did. I found that are very delicious. I and I especially preferred eating snacks when I was young because I like eating sweet. For example, I I always eat sweets when I was in kindergarten.

✓ Yes, I did. I found that they were very delicious. I especially preferred eating snacks when I was young because I liked eating sweets. For example, I always ate sweets when I was in kindergarten.

'sweet'应为复数'sweets'，因为指的是多种甜食。

× I prefer chocolate because I like sweet snacks and I are person who like doing some sports very much so chocolates can make me feel energetic and it can provide me with some energy.

✓ I prefer chocolate because I like sweet snacks and I am a person who likes doing some sports very much, so chocolate can make me feel energetic and it can provide me with some energy.

'I are person'应为'I am a person'，'chocolates'改为单数'chocolate'，保持一致。

× I prefer chocolate because I like sweet snacks and I are person who like doing some sports very much so chocolates can make me feel energetic and it can provide me with some energy.

✓ I prefer chocolate because I like sweet snacks and I am a person who likes doing some sports very much, so chocolate can make me feel energetic and it can provide me with some energy.

主语'I'后应使用动词'am'，'person who like'中的'like'应改为'likes'，因为主语是第三人称单数。