Snacks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，并且回答应更完整。例如，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually eat snacks whenever I feel hungry, but I try not to spoil my appetite for a proper meal. Therefore, I choose light snacks to keep me satisfied without feeling too full.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意语法完整性。

例: Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy if I choose wisely. For instance, I prefer fruits or nuts instead of fried snacks because they provide essential nutrients and energy between meals, which helps me maintain focus and avoid overeating during main meals.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议分句并使用连接词使表达更清晰。

例: Actually, yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because my parents were very busy. Sometimes, they didn't prepare my meals on time, so I would eat snacks to fill my stomach and keep myself going until dinner.

提案: 回答过于简单且重复，建议丰富内容，增加原因或描述，并避免重复表达。

例: I like to eat chips and fries because they are crispy and tasty. I've enjoyed these snacks for a long time, especially when watching movies or hanging out with friends.

× Whenever I feel hungry but I don't want to spoil my appetite for proper meal so I will eat snacks.

✓ Whenever I feel hungry but I don't want to spoil my appetite for a proper meal, so I eat snacks.

这里的句子描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时而不是将来时“will eat”。此外，'proper meal'前缺少冠词'a'。建议将“will eat”改为“eat”，并在“proper meal”前加上冠词。

× Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy if choose wisely.

✓ Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy if I choose wisely.

句中缺少主语“I”，导致句子不完整。条件状语从句中必须有主语，建议在“choose”前加上“I”。

× Whenever I feel hungry but I don't want to spoil my appetite for proper meal so I will eat snacks.

✓ Whenever I feel hungry but I don't want to spoil my appetite for a proper meal, so I eat snacks.

“proper meal”前缺少不定冠词“a”，英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。建议加上冠词“a”。

× These two are my favorite snacks for a very long time.

✓ These two have been my favorite snacks for a very long time.

句子中“for a very long time”表示从过去持续到现在的动作，应该用现在完成时而不是一般现在时。建议将“are”改为“have been”。