Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，避免口语化的感叹词，保持回答简洁且逻辑清晰。

例: I consider myself a patient person when dealing with others. However, I become impatient when technology does not work properly, such as when my computer freezes or the internet is slow.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达。

例: I feel impatient when I am deeply engaged in a movie, like Harry Potter, especially during exciting scenes. If my phone freezes or the Wi-Fi drops, it disrupts my experience and makes me frustrated.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，建议使用正确的单复数形式和更自然的表达，同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I enjoy doing tasks that interest me, such as research or watching fascinating films, because I can immerse myself in them. However, I feel frustrated when I have to do things I dislike, like mathematics.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰，建议明确职业身份，正确使用词汇，并避免自相矛盾的表述。

例: As a full-time student studying applied psychology, I need to be very patient because conducting research involves complex calculations and careful analysis of assumptions.

提案: 回答内容具体，但语法和词汇使用需改进，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Not exactly. When I was a child, I could concentrate on writing novels and fairy tales for hours, sometimes even skipping meals. However, now my attention is more easily distracted.

× I thought I was a so patient person until I get my solution.

✓ I thought I was such a patient person until I got my solution.

这里'so'用法错误，应该用'such a'来修饰可数名词'person'。另外，时态应保持一致，'get'应改为过去式'got'。

× So I can just wait for people no problem, but when the technology gives me no enough support I will get no patience.

✓ So I can just wait for people with no problem, but when the technology gives me not enough support, I will lose my patience.

'no enough support'用法错误，正确表达应为'not enough support'。'get no patience'表达不自然，改为'lose my patience'更符合英语习惯。

× It's enjoyable if I am doing my research or having a fascinating films that I can be immersed in these things.

✓ It's enjoyable if I am doing my research or watching fascinating films that I can be immersed in.

'having a fascinating films'语法错误，'films'是复数，前面不应有'a'，且动词应为'watching'而非'having'。

× Since I am a full time student studying applied psychology, my main job is to conduct researchers, so it requires me to be very impatient because the work needs a lot of complexity calculations and assumptions detection.

✓ Since I am a full-time student studying applied psychology, my main job is to conduct research, so it requires me to be very patient because the work needs a lot of complex calculations and assumption detection.

'conduct researchers'错误，应为'conduct research'。'complexity calculations'应为'complex calculations'，'assumptions detection'应为'assumption detection'。另外，'impatient'应改为'patient'，与语境相符。

× In my childhood I focused on writing some novels and other fairies stories for a long time, even for a whole day without any dinners or lunch.

✓ In my childhood I focused on writing some novels and other fairy stories for a long time, even for a whole day without any dinner or lunch.

'fairies stories'应为'fairy stories'，'dinners'应为不可数名词'dinner'。