Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免使用冒犯性词汇，并且注意主谓一致和时态。

例: I don't consider myself a very patient person because I find it hard to study for more than five hours. Also, I sometimes avoid talking to people who annoy me.

提案: 回答中出现了自相矛盾的内容（排长队时感到耐心），且语法错误较多。建议明确表达观点，避免矛盾，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Many things make me feel impatient. For example, waiting in a long line or having to wait for a long time often makes me nervous and frustrated.

提案: 回答较简短，表达基本清楚，但语法和用词不够准确。建议丰富细节，使用连接词，并注意语法准确性。

例: When I have to speak for a long time, I tend to lose focus and sometimes feel sleepy because it requires a lot of concentration.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复，并具体说明为什么需要耐心。

例: Yes, as a student, I often work on group projects which require patience to communicate effectively with my classmates. Sometimes, I also have to complete boring assignments, which tests my patience.

提案: 回答表达了对比，但语法错误影响理解。建议使用正确的形容词形式和句子结构，表达更自然。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have developed better self-control over the years.

× I can't continue study about 5 hours

✓ I can't continue studying for about 5 hours

这里动词后面需要用动名词形式，表示持续进行的动作。'study'应改为'studying'。

× sometimes when I meet some stupid people I don't talk with her

✓ sometimes when I meet some stupid people I don't talk with them

'some stupid people'是复数，代词应使用复数形式'them'，而不是单数的'her'。

× many things can makes me feel impatient

✓ many things can make me feel impatient

情态动词后面动词用原形，不能加-s。'makes'应改为'make'。

× if I stay in a long line I will feel patient

✓ if I stay in a long line I will feel impatient

根据上下文，排长队会让人感到不耐烦，'patient'应改为相反的'impatient'。

× if I have to wait for a long time, uh, I think it also can makes me nervous

✓ if I have to wait for a long time, uh, I think it also can make me nervous

情态动词'can'后面动词用原形，不能加-s。'makes'应改为'make'。

× If I have to say something for a long time

✓ If I have to say something for a long time

此句中'for a long time'用法正确，无需修改。

× If I have to say something for a long time, I think I will lose my focus and I maybe feel sleepy

✓ If I have to say something for a long time, I think I will lose my focus and maybe feel sleepy

'maybe'作为副词应放在动词前，'I maybe feel'应改为'maybe feel'。

× sometimes I have to have a group project, so I have to be patient, talked with my classmates and sometimes I have to have some boring license but so I have to patient to have this

✓ sometimes I have to do a group project, so I have to be patient, talk with my classmates and sometimes I have to do some boring tasks, so I have to be patient to do this

'have a group project'应改为'do a group project'，'talked'应为原形'talk'，'have some boring license'表达不当，应改为'do some boring tasks'，'have to patient'应为'have to be patient'。

× when I was a child I really impatient

✓ when I was a child I was really impatient

此处缺少系动词'was'，形容词'impatient'前应有系动词。

× I can now patient than before

✓ I can be more patient now than before

'patient'是形容词，需用'be'动词，且比较级应为'more patient'，顺序调整为'can be more patient now than before'。