Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I am a patient person because I enjoy focusing on things I am passionate about. For example, when I learn a new skill, I take my time to practice and improve without rushing.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单句子表达具体原因，并避免重复和不相关内容。

例: Examinations make me feel impatient because I find them stressful. Sometimes, the pressure from teachers to perform well adds to my impatience.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，建议用更准确的词汇表达感受，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: It depends on the activity. For example, studying for a long time can be boring, but playing football keeps me interested and entertained.

提案: 回答偏离问题焦点，语法和表达不准确，建议直接回答问题并用具体理由支持。

例: I don't have a job currently, but as a student, I need to be patient when studying and preparing for exams to achieve good results.

提案: 表达不够清晰，时态和句子结构有误，建议用简单句子清楚比较现在和过去的耐心程度。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Playing football has taught me to be more focused and patient in many activities.

× I was simply say I'm actually a patient person because I'm very passionate with the things I want and I like to do.

✓ I was simply saying I'm actually a patient person because I'm very passionate about the things I want and I like to do.

这里动词时态错误，'was simply say' 应该用进行时态 'was simply saying'，表示过去某时正在做的动作。此外，'passionate with' 应改为 'passionate about'，介词使用错误。

× I was simply say I'm actually a patient person because I'm very passionate with the things I want and I like to do.

✓ I was simply saying I'm actually a patient person because I'm very passionate about the things I want and I like to do.

'passionate' 后面应接介词 'about'，表示对某事充满热情，'with' 用法错误。

× For example, something that interests to do with.

✓ For example, something that interests me to do.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，'interests to do with' 结构错误，应改为 'interests me to do'。

× I will be more patient in it and also.

✓ I will be more patient with it as well.

句子不完整，缺少必要成分，'and also' 位置不当，应改为 'as well' 并补充完整句子。

× I think study examination is quite made me feel impatient because I think I just need to learn it is OK for me but the teacher or some principal must make us to more be more professional in it and also very local law.

✓ I think studying for examinations makes me feel impatient because I think I just need to learn; it's OK for me, but the teacher or some principal must make us more professional in it, and also with local law.

句子结构混乱，时态和语序错误，'study examination is quite made me feel' 应改为 'studying for examinations makes me feel'，并调整句子使其通顺。

× I think study examination is quite made me feel impatient because I think I just need to learn it is OK for me but the teacher or some principal must make us to more be more professional in it and also very local law.

✓ I think studying for examinations makes me feel impatient because I think I just need to learn; it's OK for me, but the teacher or some principal must make us more professional in it, and also with local law.

'study' 应改为动名词形式 'studying'，表示正在进行的动作。

× I think study examination is quite made me feel impatient because I think I just need to learn it is OK for me but the teacher or some principal must make us to more be more professional in it and also very local law.

✓ I think studying for examinations makes me feel impatient because I think I just need to learn; it's OK for me, but the teacher or some principal must make us more professional in it, and also with local law.

'make us to more be more professional' 中 'to' 不应出现，且 'in it and also very local law' 介词使用不当，应改为 'more professional in it, and also with local law'。

× Like for example studying is quite annoying for me because I would not like to umm attend with it.

✓ For example, studying is quite annoying for me because I would not like to attend it.

'attend with it' 介词使用错误，'attend' 后直接接宾语即可，不需要 'with'。

× But if playing with some sports like football, I'm very interesting and amusing with it.

✓ But if I play some sports like football, I'm very interested and amused by it.

'interesting' 和 'amusing' 是形容词，描述事物，描述人的情感应使用 'interested' 和 'amused'。

× But if playing with some sports like football, I'm very interesting and amusing with it.

✓ But if I play some sports like football, I'm very interested and amused by it.

'amusing with it' 介词使用错误，应改为 'amused by it'。

× I don't have jobs right now because I'm just a student and I think to be a student we should have patience with our examinations because if we don't have passionate with the homework or some information that we need to learn, it will lead us to down lower Marks and also lower bounds.

✓ I don't have a job right now because I'm just a student and I think to be a student we should have patience with our examinations because if we aren't passionate about the homework or some information that we need to learn, it will lead us to lower marks and also lower bounds.

'jobs' 应为单数 'a job'，'passionate with' 应为 'passionate about'，'lead us to down lower Marks' 结构错误，应改为 'lead us to lower marks'。

× I don't have jobs right now because I'm just a student and I think to be a student we should have patience with our examinations because if we don't have passionate with the homework or some information that we need to learn, it will lead us to down lower Marks and also lower bounds.

✓ I don't have a job right now because I'm just a student and I think to be a student we should have patience with our examinations because if we aren't passionate about the homework or some information that we need to learn, it will lead us to lower marks and also lower bounds.

'passionate' 后应接介词 'about'，'patience with' 用法正确。

× I think nowadays I'm becoming patient when I was a child because I think after I have an involved in playing football, I become more passionate with everything that I have done like play basketball.

✓ I think nowadays I'm more patient than when I was a child because after I got involved in playing football, I became more passionate about everything that I have done, like playing basketball.

'becoming patient when I was a child' 时态和比较错误，应改为 'more patient than when I was a child'；'have an involved' 应为 'got involved'；'passionate with' 应为 'passionate about'；'like play basketball' 应为 'like playing basketball'。

× I think nowadays I'm becoming patient when I was a child because I think after I have an involved in playing football, I become more passionate with everything that I have done like play basketball.

✓ I think nowadays I'm more patient than when I was a child because after I got involved in playing football, I became more passionate about everything that I have done, like playing basketball.

时态错误，'have an involved' 应为过去式 'got involved'，'become' 应为过去式 'became'，因为描述过去发生的事情。