Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, although sometimes I can get a bit irritated.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议使用简单句子，明确说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I feel impatient when people do not listen to me carefully because it makes me feel ignored.

提案: 表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议用简洁的句子表达感受，并用连接词连接观点。

例: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel motivated because I am passionate and willing to work hard.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持观点。

例: Yes, my job requires patience because learning English takes time and dedication, which I am passionate about.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议用简单句子清楚表达对比，并举例说明。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because as an adult, I have to handle many responsibilities like my job and studies.

× Maybe I just irritate sometimes.

✓ Maybe I just get irritated sometimes.

这里的动词 'irritate' 用法不当，应该用被动形式 'get irritated' 表示“我有时会感到烦躁”。'Irritate' 是及物动词，需有宾语。

× Well, I think just someone people don't listen my sentence very carefully or very patient, I will feel that just just people don't impatient person.

✓ Well, I think when some people don't listen to my sentences very carefully or aren't very patient, I feel that they are just impatient people.

句中缺少介词 'to'，'listen' 后应接介词 'to'。'my sentence' 应为复数 'my sentences'。句子结构混乱，需调整以表达清晰。

× Well, I think just someone people don't listen my sentence very carefully or very patient, I will feel that just just people don't impatient person.

✓ Well, I think when some people don't listen to my sentences very carefully or aren't very patient, I feel that they are just impatient people.

代词使用错误，'people don't impatient person' 语法不通，应改为 'they are just impatient people'。

× Hmm, I wanna say don't any else feeling because if you want to do something for a long time, you must have a passion and try hard because long time something is very difficult and it will consider your passion.

✓ Hmm, I want to say I don't have any other feelings because if you want to do something for a long time, you must have passion and try hard because doing something for a long time is very difficult and it will test your passion.

'don't any else feeling' 语法错误，应为 'I don't have any other feelings'。此外，'long time something' 结构不正确，应改为 'doing something for a long time'。

× Yes, of course, like my job today my job is learning English, IO.

✓ Yes, of course, like today, my job is learning English, IO.

句中重复 'my job'，且缺少逗号分隔，导致句子不通顺。

× So this is very my passion because if I can't have a passion, I can't do very well.

✓ So this is my great passion because if I don't have passion, I can't do very well.

'very my passion' 语序错误，应为 'my great passion'。此外，'can't have a passion' 应改为 'don't have passion'。

× Yes, I think I'm very patient and in the past when I was child because right now I'm a adult.

✓ Yes, I think I'm very patient now, and in the past when I was a child because right now I'm an adult.

'when I was child' 缺少冠词，应为 'when I was a child'。'a adult' 中 'adult' 以元音音素开头，冠词应为 'an'。

× So I must have to good patient to deal with many things, for example like my jaw, my learning.

✓ So I must have good patience to deal with many things, for example, like my job, my learning.

'have to good patient' 结构错误，应为 'have good patience'。'jaw' 应为 'job'。

× So I must have to good patient to deal with many things, for example like my jaw, my learning.

✓ So I must have good patience to deal with many things, for example, like my job, my learning.

'have to good patient' 中多余 'to'，应去掉。

× So that's.

✓ So that's it.

句子不完整，缺少谓语或补充说明，需补充完整。