Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が少し不自然で、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「give up early to difficult question」は正しくなく、「give up easily on difficult questions」などが適切です。また、答えが直接的でなく曖昧なので、もっと明確に自分の性格を述べると良いでしょう。

例: I'm not a very patient person because I tend to give up easily when I face difficult questions.

提案: 文法的に誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。「makes me so patient」は逆の意味になっているため、「makes me impatient」が正しいです。具体的な例を挙げるのは良いですが、文を簡潔にし、正しい文法を使いましょう。

例: Very difficult exams and challenging tasks make me feel impatient because they are hard to solve.

提案: 「I feel so troublesome and annoying」は不自然な表現です。「I feel troubled and annoyed」や「I find it troublesome and annoying」が適切です。また、「I like to. Stay active」は文が途切れているため、文をつなげて自然にしましょう。

例: I feel annoyed when I have to do something for a long time because I like to stay active and enjoy my life.

提案: 答えは直接的で内容も理解できますが、「But I try to be a patient person」の前に接続詞を使い、文をつなげるとより自然です。また、「university entrance exam」は単数形なので「the university entrance exam」が適切です。

例: Yes, of course. I'm studying for the university entrance exam, which requires a lot of patience and effort, so I try to be a patient person.

提案: 「I can grow up from my child times」は不自然な表現です。「I have grown since I was a child」などが適切です。また、「it is very troublesome for many people」も曖昧なので、具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I have become more patient since I was a child. When I was young, I was a troublemaker, which caused problems for many people.

× I want to give up early to difficult question.

✓ I want to give up early on difficult questions.

'Question' should be plural 'questions' because it refers to more than one difficult question. Also, the preposition 'to' is incorrect here; it should be 'on' to indicate the object of giving up.

× I dislike too difficult things makes me so patient, such as very difficult exams or very challenging tasks.

✓ I dislike things that are too difficult because they make me impatient, such as very difficult exams or very challenging tasks.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction and structure. 'Too difficult things makes me so patient' is ungrammatical. It should be 'things that are too difficult' and 'make me impatient' to express the intended meaning.

× Maybe I feel so troublesome and annoying because I like to. Stay active and feel comfortable with my life.

✓ Maybe I feel troubled and annoyed because I like to stay active and feel comfortable with my life.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word choices. 'Troublesome and annoying' are adjectives describing things, not feelings. The correct feelings are 'troubled' and 'annoyed'. Also, the period after 'to' is incorrect and should be removed.

× Yes, of course I'm studying for university entrance exam but it takes a lot of patience and effort.

✓ Yes, of course I'm studying for the university entrance exam, but it takes a lot of patience and effort.

The phrase 'university entrance exam' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, a comma is needed before 'but' to separate the clauses properly.

× Yes, I think I can grow up from my child times.

✓ Yes, I think I have grown up since my childhood.

The phrase 'grow up from my child times' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'have grown up since my childhood' to indicate development over time.

× When I was a child, I was a troublemaker, so it is very troublesome for many people.

✓ When I was a child, I was a troublemaker, so I was very troublesome for many people.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is' with past context. It should be past tense 'was' to match the time frame. Also, 'troublesome' is correctly used here.