Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer ta aro natural korte, apni simple ar clear sentence use korun, ar repetition avoid korun. For example, 'I am a patient person' er por abar 'Basically' diye start kora unnecessary. Apni ekta clear topic sentence diye start korun, tarpor supporting details add korun.

例: Yes, I am a patient person. I can control my emotions well, especially when I am working. This helps me to focus and complete my tasks carefully and calmly.

提案: Apnar answer e clarity ar coherence kom ache. Apni linking words use kore sentence gulo ke logically connect korun. Apni specific example dite paren jemon kon dhoroner noise apnake impatient kore. Also, grammar ar vocabulary improve korte hobe.

例: I feel impatient when I am studying and there is noise around me, such as people talking loudly. This distracts me and makes me angry, so I try to do something enjoyable to calm myself down.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar vocabulary error ache. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro fluent banate paren. Specific details dite paren jemon keno apni stress feel koren ar ki dhoroner music apni listen koren.

例: When I have to do something for a long time, like studying for two or three hours without a break, I feel distracted and bored. To reduce my stress, I usually listen to relaxing music, which helps me concentrate better.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice error ache. Apni sentence gulo ke aro clear ar concise korte paren. Linking words use kore idea gulo ke logically connect korun. Apni specific karon dite paren keno patience important.

例: As a student, I need to be patient while studying because without patience, I cannot focus well. Being patient helps me understand difficult topics and achieve success in the future.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar vocabulary error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro coherent banate paren. Specific examples dite paren jemon kibhabe apni patient hoyechen.

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. In the past, I had anger issues and found it hard to control myself. But now, I listen carefully to others and stay calm in difficult situations.

× I am patient person.

✓ I am a patient person.

The noun 'person' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct in English.

× I can easily control myself and my emotion, my feelings whenever I do any kind of work at that time.

✓ I can easily control myself and my emotions, my feelings whenever I do any kind of work at that time.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the plural 'feelings' and to correctly express multiple feelings.

× I can easily, attentively and patiently doing this work because I can control myself.

✓ I can easily, attentively and patiently do this work because I can control myself.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'do' should be used instead of the '-ing' form 'doing'.

× When I distract from any kind of work, like uh, I'm, I study and that time I face, uh, some noise from someone at that time, uh, I didn't control my anger issue.

✓ When I am distracted from any kind of work, like when I study and at that time I face some noise from someone, I cannot control my anger.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb forms. 'Distract' should be passive 'am distracted' to indicate the subject is affected. 'Didn't control' is past tense but the context is present habitual, so 'cannot control' is appropriate.

× I tried to do this type of work, which make me pleasure.

✓ I try to do this type of work, which gives me pleasure.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular 'work'. Also, 'pleasure' is a noun and the phrase should be 'gives me pleasure'. 'Tried' is past tense but context suggests present habitual action, so 'try' is better.

× When I'm studying during two or three hour without post that time I feel like more destruction and I feel like more boring that situation.

✓ When I'm studying for two or three hours without pause, I feel more distracted and bored in that situation.

'During' should be 'for' to indicate duration. 'Hour' should be plural 'hours'. 'Post' is incorrect; 'pause' is correct. 'Destruction' is incorrect; 'distracted' fits the context. 'More boring' should be 'bored' to describe feeling.

× One of is listening music which is really helpful for reducing my stress at this moment.

✓ One of them is listening to music, which is really helpful for reducing my stress at this moment.

The phrase 'listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to music'. Also, 'One of is' is incomplete; 'One of them is' is correct.

× As a student, I think it's really important for me to keep a patient in my study table because if I don't study properly or patiently, then I will never be successful man in the future.

✓ As a student, I think it's really important for me to be patient at my study table because if I don't study properly or patiently, then I will never be a successful man in the future.

'Keep a patient' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'be patient'. 'Study table' should be preceded by 'at' to indicate location. 'Successful man' needs the article 'a' before it.

× So I think it's really helpful and essential role play in our life.

✓ So I think it plays a really helpful and essential role in our life.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Role play' should be 'plays a role'. The verb 'plays' agrees with singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I think now I am more patient rather than past.

✓ Yes, I think now I am more patient than in the past.

The phrase 'rather than past' is incorrect; the correct comparative phrase is 'more patient than in the past'.

× I never skied that time.

✓ I never cried at that time.

The word 'skied' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'cried', which fits the context of emotional expression.

× Whenever I need to listen anyone I just listen attentively.

✓ Whenever I need to listen to anyone, I just listen attentively.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object.