Patience— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you a patient person?
受験者
Yes, I think I am a patient person. I always do things and tasks step by step and if I really like meet someone that is hard to get along with or some tasks that is really difficult, I will like do them step by step and calmly analyze it.
試験官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
受験者
I think the repetitive things can make me feel impatient because I am a person that uh, loves innovation and different challenges, so the repetitive things can make me feel bored.
試験官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
受験者
Umm, I think that depends. If it's a repetitive work umm, that is very bored, I will feel umm impatient if I have to do that for a long time. But if it is uh, I think that I am interested in and this re really challenging, I will love it.
試験官
Does your job require you to be patient?
受験者
Umm, yes, absolutely, because umm, my major needs me to analyze the behavior of consumers and also analyse the marketing situation. So it's really necessary to be patient to take these tasks step by step.
試験官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
受験者
Umm, yes, I'm getting more and more patient, especially umm, after I entered university because umm, there are a lot of work and study that pushed me to be more patient.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答时语法和表达有些不自然，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的连接词。
例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I approach tasks step by step. Even when I meet difficult people or face challenging tasks, I calmly analyze the situation and handle it carefully.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容较好，但有口头语“uh”，影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用更丰富的词汇表达原因。
例: Repetitive tasks make me feel impatient because I enjoy innovation and new challenges. Doing the same thing repeatedly often makes me bored and restless.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有较多口头语，表达不够连贯。建议减少口头语，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。
例: It depends on the task. If the work is repetitive and boring, I tend to feel impatient after a long time. However, if the task is interesting and challenging, I enjoy doing it for extended periods.
Does your job require you to be patient?
スコア: 78.0提案: 回答中有多处口头语，影响表达流畅。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子结构的多样性。
例: Yes, my job definitely requires patience because I need to analyze consumer behavior and marketing situations carefully. It's important to handle these tasks step by step to ensure accuracy.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答中口头语较多，表达略显重复。建议减少口头语，使用更丰富的词汇和句式表达变化。
例: Yes, I have become more patient, especially since entering university. The increased workload and study demands have taught me to be more patient and persistent.
文法
× if I really like meet someone that is hard to get along with or some tasks that is really difficult
✓ if I really like meet someone that is hard to get along with or some tasks that are really difficult
这里的tasks是复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式are，而不是is。
× I will like do them step by step and calmly analyze it.
✓ I will like doing them step by step and calmly analyze them.
动词like后面接动名词doing更自然，且analyze的宾语应与前文tasks对应，使用复数them。
× If it's a repetitive work umm, that is very bored, I will feel umm impatient if I have to do that for a long time.
✓ If it's repetitive work, umm, that is very boring, I will feel umm impatient if I have to do that for a long time.
bored是形容人的情绪，boring是形容事物的性质，这里应使用boring来形容work。
× there are a lot of work and study that pushed me to be more patient.
✓ there is a lot of work and study that pushed me to be more patient.
work是不可数名词，前面用a lot of时谓语动词应使用单数is。
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