Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“used to touch my sister”表达不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when helping my sister with difficult tasks, I explain the problems carefully and repeat the explanations several times to ensure she understands.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，句子结构有些重复，且存在语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富细节。

例: I feel impatient when I meet someone who is very stubborn and refuses to admit their mistakes. Moreover, it frustrates me when they get angry without any clear reason.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“never given up”应为“have never given up”，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词，并注意时态。

例: I feel very proud of myself because I have never given up. Doing something for a long time is a pleasant, meaningful, and memorable experience for me.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但“patient to my clients”表达不准确，应为“patient with my clients”。建议注意介词使用，并适当使用连接词。

例: I used to work in a small milk tea shop, where I needed to be very patient with my clients. Sometimes, I had to explain special conditions clearly to them.

提案: 回答内容不够连贯，部分句子表达不完整或含糊。建议使用连接词使回答更流畅，并明确表达观点。

例: I have become more patient as I have grown up. I realize that most people sometimes struggle to understand things, so I try to be more tolerant and patient. I believe patience is an important quality in daily life.

× I feel very proud of myself because I never given up and doing something for a long time is a very pleasant and meaningful and memorable experience for me.

✓ I feel very proud of myself because I have never given up and doing something for a long time is a very pleasant, meaningful, and memorable experience for me.

这里“never given up”缺少助动词“have”，正确的现在完成时结构是“have never given up”。此外，列举多个形容词时应使用逗号分隔。

× I used to be a staff member in a small milk tea shop and I need to be very patient to my clients and sometimes I need to explain special conditions clearly to them.

✓ I used to be a staff member in a small milk tea shop and I needed to be very patient with my clients and sometimes I needed to explain special conditions clearly to them.

“patient”后面应搭配介词“with”，表示对某人有耐心。时态应与“used to”保持一致，改为过去时“needed”。

× Sometimes when I meet some someone is very stubborn and they refuse to admit their mistakes.

✓ Sometimes when I meet someone who is very stubborn, they refuse to admit their mistakes.

“some someone”是错误的表达，应为“someone”。此外，缺少关系代词“who”引导定语从句。

× And I repeat that explains several times.

✓ And I repeat those explanations several times.

原句结构混乱，“that explains”用法错误，应改为“those explanations”作为宾语，且“repeat”后接名词。

× Now when I grow up, I realize that most people always have.

✓ Now that I have grown up, I realize that most people always have.

“when I grow up”时态不正确，表示已经成长应使用完成时“have grown up”。

× I need to be more tolerant and patient. This is also a good quality in daily life.

✓ I need to be more tolerant and patient, which is also a good quality in daily life.

两句之间缺少连接词，使用“which”引导非限制性定语从句，使句子更连贯。