Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，句子结构需更清晰，建议直接回答问题并用具体理由支持。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I believe that most tasks require sufficient time to complete properly.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单明了的句子表达具体让你不耐烦的情况。

例: I feel impatient when people use rude language or behave impatiently during conversations.

提案: 回答中断断续续，表达不流畅，建议减少语气词，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: On one hand, I believe that if a task takes a long time, it must be completed. However, on the other hand, I often feel impatient because I get bored.

提案: 回答不够具体，表达含糊，建议明确说明学生需要耐心的原因并用连词连接句子。

例: As a student, I need to be patient because classes involve various questions, and I have to listen carefully and answer the teacher's questions.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清，建议用简单句子清楚对比现在和过去的耐心程度。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to cry and shout in public, but now I can control my emotions better.

× No doubt. I think I'm a patient person because I think everything you need enough time to do it and you should be a patient person.

✓ No doubt. I think I'm a patient person because I think everything needs enough time to be done and you should be a patient person.

这里动词需要用-ing形式或被动形式来表达“需要时间去做某事”，原句中缺少动词的正确形式，导致句子不通顺。建议使用被动语态或动名词形式。

× Maybe sometimes others chat with you with bad words or they she feel impatient.

✓ Maybe sometimes others chat with you with bad words or they feel impatient.

句中出现了多余的代词“she”，导致句子结构混乱。应删除多余代词，保持主语一致。

× So it made it will make me feel very impatient.

✓ So it makes me feel very impatient.

原句中“made it will make”结构错误，时态混乱。应使用一般现在时“makes”来表达习惯性动作。

× if you need to do something for a long time, you must to, uh, finish it.

✓ if you need to do something for a long time, you must finish it.

情态动词“must”后不加“to”，原句多余使用“to”，应去掉。

× But most of the time, uh, in, in the other hand, umm, I always feel very impatient because I, I'm bored for it.

✓ But most of the time, uh, on the other hand, umm, I always feel very impatient because I'm bored with it.

短语“in the other hand”应为“on the other hand”，表示转折。动词“bored”后应接介词“with”而非“for”。

× Now I'm a student. I think student uh must need to be patient because uh, in classes they are a different kind of questions.

✓ Now I'm a student. I think students must be patient because in classes there are different kinds of questions.

“student”应为复数“students”，表示一般情况。名词“questions”前应使用复数形式“kinds”。

× in classes they are a different kind of questions.

✓ in classes there are different kinds of questions.

表示存在时应使用“There are”，而非“they are”。

× You need to sync it and uh have to umm answer teacher's questions.

✓ You need to think about it and have to answer the teacher's questions.

“sync”用词不当，应为“think about”。“teacher's questions”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I have graduated and children child in my child I think I always share, cry and shout in public.

✓ I have graduated and when I was a child, I think I always shared, cried and shouted in public.

“children child in my child”语序和用词错误，应改为“when I was a child”。动词时态应为过去式。

× I think I always share, cry and shout in public.

✓ I think I always shared, cried and shouted in public.

描述过去习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式。