Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. "I have no patient at all" ifadesi yanlış, doğrusu "I have no patience at all" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz karışık ve doğal değil. Daha açık ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

例: It depends on the situation and the person. For example, I am usually patient with strangers, but I tend to be less patient with close friends or family members.

提案: Cevabınızda bazı tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "gonna we are going to" ifadesi gereksiz tekrar. Ayrıca, "disrespectful behavior to someone" ifadesi yerine "disrespectful to someone" daha doğru olur. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğal hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

例: I feel impatient when I am disrespected. For instance, if we agree to meet at 2:00 and I arrive on time but my friend doesn't show up, I find that very disrespectful.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "I feel enjoyed" yanlış, doğrusu "I enjoy it" veya "I feel happy" olmalı. "I will going to do" ifadesi de yanlış, "I am going to do" veya "I have to do" daha doğru. Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net kurmaya çalışın.

例: If I have to do something I love, I enjoy it. However, if I have to do something I dislike, I feel exhausted because nobody wants to do things they don't like.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. "the learning process is require patient" ifadesi yanlış, doğrusu "the learning process requires patience" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, it does. As a student, I often have to wait a long time for exam results. Also, sometimes we wait for the teacher to arrive, so patience is important in the learning process.

提案: Cevabınızda bazı gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler var (umm, uh). "other peoples close to me" ifadesi yanlış, doğrusu "other people close to me" olmalı. Daha akıcı ve doğal cümleler kurmaya çalışın.

例: I am definitely more patient now. When I was a child, I was often angry and impatient, but now I realize that it's not good for me or the people close to me, so I try to stay calm.

× If I don't know the person I'm talking with and I have a lot of patience, but if I if the person is my close friend or sister I have no patient at all.

✓ If I don't know the person I'm talking with, I have a lot of patience, but if the person is my close friend or sister, I have no patience at all.

The word 'patient' is an adjective, but here the noun form 'patience' is needed to express the quality of being patient. Also, the sentence structure was incomplete and needed correction for clarity.

× If I don't know the person I'm talking with and I have a lot of patience, but if I if the person is my close friend or sister I have no patient at all.

✓ If I don't know the person I'm talking to, I have a lot of patience, but if the person is my close friend or sister, I have no patience at all.

The correct preposition to use with 'talk' when referring to the person is 'to' rather than 'with'. 'Talk to' is the standard collocation.

× I think it's very disrespectful behavior to someone.

✓ I think it's very disrespectful behavior towards someone.

The preposition 'towards' is more appropriate than 'to' when describing behavior directed at someone.

× If I have to do something that I love, I feel enjoyed, but if I don't like the thing I will going to do, I feel exhausted because no one's wants to do something they don't want.

✓ If I have to do something that I love, I feel enjoyment, but if I don't like the thing I am going to do, I feel exhausted because no one wants to do something they don't want.

The verb 'feel' should be followed by a noun or adjective, so 'enjoyed' (past participle) is incorrect here; 'enjoyment' (noun) fits better. Also, 'will going to do' is incorrect; it should be 'am going to do'. Additionally, 'no one's wants' is incorrect; it should be 'no one wants'.

× Sometimes we wait for the teacher to come to class and the learning process is require patient too.

✓ Sometimes we wait for the teacher to come to class and the learning process requires patience too.

The verb 'require' needs to be in the third person singular form 'requires' to agree with the singular subject 'learning process'. Also, 'patient' should be 'patience' as a noun.

× Sometimes we wait for the teacher to come to class and the learning process is require patient too.

✓ Sometimes we wait for the teacher to come to class and the learning process requires patience too.

The noun 'patient' is incorrect here; the correct noun form is 'patience' to express the quality needed.

× I used to be a very angry and impatient, umm, child, but now I understand that it's not OK. It's not good for me. It's not good for, uh, other peoples close to me.

✓ I used to be a very angry and impatient, umm, child, but now I understand that it's not OK. It's not good for me. It's not good for other people close to me.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural form is 'people' when referring to persons.