Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多的填充词（如 uh, um），影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少这些无意义的词汇，使回答更自然。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达。

例: I consider myself patient in situations that require long-term focus, but I get impatient when waiting in long queues or during flight delays because I feel it's a waste of time.

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，如“makes makes”，“caught caught”，“a really waste”。建议注意语法准确性和词汇的正确使用，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Traffic jams, especially in big cities, make me feel impatient because they waste a lot of time. However, I try to avoid this by using public transportation, which is usually faster.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议加强语法练习，避免重复和不完整的句子。同时，使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

例: When I do something I enjoy for a long time, I can stay focused and time seems to fly. However, if the task is challenging, I often feel anxious.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，如“grasp what they for, to grasp what they really want”。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I deal with many clients and need time to understand their true needs.

提案: 回答内容混乱且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用完整句子直接回答问题，并避免重复和错误。

例: I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I was often impatient, but now I can handle long-term tasks with more patience.

× Umm what makes makes me feel impatient is definitely the traffic jam, especially in a big cities.

✓ Umm what makes me feel impatient is definitely the traffic jam, especially in big cities.

这里的“a big cities”中，“cities”是复数，前面不应该用不定冠词“a”，应直接用复数形式“big cities”。

× In a big city, umm caught caught up in the traffic jam can be a really waste of time.

✓ In a big city, umm being caught up in the traffic jam can be a real waste of time.

“caught caught up”重复且缺少动名词形式，应该用“being caught up”表示被动状态；“a really waste”中“waste”应为名词，前面用“a real waste”更合适。

× But uh, I find taking the public transportation map avoid this issue.

✓ But uh, I find taking public transportation helps avoid this issue.

“map avoid”搭配错误，应改为“helps avoid”表示帮助避免；“the public transportation”前的定冠词通常省略，直接用“public transportation”。

× Uh, if it is something that I really enjoy, it would make me focused.

✓ Uh, if it is something that I really enjoy, it would make me focus.

“make me focused”中“focused”是形容词，表达“使我专注”应使用动词原形“focus”。

× I get myself into a state of mind that, uh, find the time flies by quickly.

✓ I get myself into a state of mind where, uh, I find the time flies by quickly.

缺少主语“I”，且“that”应改为“where”更符合表达“在那种状态下”的意思。

× But, uh, if there's something that I have to, uh, to do it with challenge, I think that made me anxiety.

✓ But, uh, if there's something that I have to, uh, do with challenge, I think that makes me anxious.

“made me anxiety”错误，应该用动词“makes”加形容词“anxious”表示“让我感到焦虑”。

× Uh, and it's, it takes me a little bit time to grasp what they for, to grasp what they really want.

✓ Uh, and it takes me a little bit of time to grasp what they really want.

“a little bit time”缺少介词“of”，应为“a little bit of time”；“what they for”多余，应删除。

× So it's definitely need patience.

✓ So it definitely needs patience.

主语“it”是单数，谓语动词“need”应加第三人称单数形式“needs”。

× It can be quite the different uh for the two different phase of 1P of 1's life.

✓ It can be quite different for the two different phases of one's life.

“the different”后缺少名词，“phase”应为复数“phases”；“1P of 1's life”应为“one's life”。

× Like I am patient, uh, when I have to deal with long term task.

✓ Like I am patient, uh, when I have to deal with long-term tasks.

“long term”作为形容词应连写为“long-term”；“task”应为复数“tasks”。

× But when I was a child, I was not patient and I, I was not paid. I, I am not patient.

✓ But when I was a child, I was not patient and I, I was not patient. I, I am not patient.

“paid”应为“patient”，是拼写错误，意思是“有耐心”。