Patience— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“wait other people”应为“wait for other people”。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，增加更多具体细节。

例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I don't mind waiting for others. For instance, when I wait for my mom to get ready, I usually stay calm and use that time to relax or check my phone.

提案: 回答缺少完整句子和清晰表达，建议使用连贯的句子结构，并明确表达原因和感受。

例: I feel impatient when I have to teach my brother math because it's difficult for him to understand. I want him to improve and gain confidence, but sometimes he struggles, which makes me a bit frustrated.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达感受，并用具体例子支持。

例: When I have to work on something for a long time, I usually stay focused and patient. For example, I recently completed my graduation project, which took several months to finish.

提案: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，建议先直接回答问题，再用具体例子说明，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

例: I don't have a job at the moment, but I believe most jobs require patience. For example, when doing calculations, you need to be patient to avoid mistakes.

提案: 回答应避免句子不完整，建议用完整句子表达比较和原因，并增加细节。

例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned a lot over the past ten years. I try to stay calm and think carefully before reacting.

× Well, I think I'm a patient person because in most of the time I'm willing to wait other people.

✓ Well, I think I'm a patient person because most of the time I'm willing to wait for other people.

动词wait后面需要加介词for，表示等待某人。原句缺少介词for，导致表达不完整。

× Wow whenever I have to teach my brother's math which is so hard to do because I hope he can be better than his classmates which can improve his self-confidence but he can't understand math at all so I'm.

✓ Wow, whenever I have to teach my brother math, which is so hard to do because I hope he can be better than his classmates to improve his self-confidence, but he can't understand math at all, so I'm frustrated.

原句结构混乱，缺少必要的标点和连接词，导致句子不完整。应使用逗号分隔定语从句，并补充完整句子结尾。

× Honestly, I don't have any feelings about this because I think this is common whenever we did any long term project.

✓ Honestly, I don't have any feelings about this because I think this is common whenever we do any long-term project.

句中使用了过去式did，但表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时do。

× For example, the beginning of this year I have finished about my graduation project, which project I have to spend?

✓ For example, at the beginning of this year, I finished my graduation project, which took a lot of time.

原句结构不完整且表达不清，需调整语序并补充完整信息，使句子通顺。

× Well I don't have job right now, but I think everything go job need patient for example.

✓ Well, I don't have a job right now, but I think every job requires patience, for example.

job前缺少冠词a，且everything go job表达错误，应改为every job。

× When you do some work with calculate, you have to be patient or you can't do some correct.

✓ When you do some work involving calculations, you have to be patient or you can't do it correctly.

原句中calculate用法错误，应使用名词calculations；some correct用法错误，应使用副词correctly修饰动词。

× Yeah, I think I'm more patient than when I was a little because.

✓ Yeah, I think I'm more patient than when I was little because.

little前不需要冠词a，表示“小时候”时用little。

× I learned a lot during these 10 years. I want to be a better person.

✓ I have learned a lot during these 10 years, and I want to be a better person.

两句之间缺少连接词and，连接两个相关的句子，使表达更连贯。